Forever.

"Pick up Lara, come'on...1

you're making me worried, please, pick up the phone."2

Lara kept writing in her notebook, ignoring the answering machine.3

"Well, just.. call me back ok, I'm getting worried."4

Lara looked over at the answering machine as dial rang out and the machine cut it off. Standing up she walked out of the Kitchen and up the stairs to her bedroom at the end of the hall. Walking past her sister's and parents room, her glances at the closed doors were met with silence, she home alone.5

Just how she wished it would always be.6

Continuing into her room, Lara pulled out a old and battered shoe box from under her bed, opening it, she pulled out old letters, notes and photo's. At the bottom of the box, Lara pulled out a ring.7

It was simple and plain, a band of silver with a small dark-blue stone set in it. On the inside of it was the inscription 'Forever.'8

Feeling tears filling her eyes, Lara threw the ring back into the box, and walked into the bathroom. 9

Sitting on the toilet, Lara pulled out a broken piece of metal from behind the cabinet. Digging the blade into the side of her lag, Lara closed her eyes and lent backwards, her face forming a small smile. 10

Looking to the side, Lara saw herself in the mirror. Her messy, dull blonde her, her muddy-blue eyes and flat features. Standing up suddenly, Lara threw the now bloody piece of metal at the mirror, shattering it into millions of pieces, covering the floor.11

Limping over to the mirror frame, Lara picked up the piece of metal, shards of glass cutting up her feet. Lara attempted to make her way back to the toilet, collapsing before she had taken a single step. looking down at her leg, she saw her leg now bleeding freely.12

Lara lay back, beginning to laugh, realising. After all the years of heart ache and torment, she was finally dieing because she cut too deep. As blackness began to take over, Lara began singing.13

"Forever, and ever, We'll belong to one another. Forever, and ever, it'll just be us two..."14

Author notes

"Death is the only way out."

Crawled along and ended in a typical anti-climax... I chose option 3, Death.

.BeNt AnD bRoKeN.

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  • mydarlinghamburger
    December 30, 2006

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    Ok

    ... it was ok, Kinda disappointing... I'm used to a higher standard of work from you, but othawise... good... mayb more depth would hav helped??
    Luv MDH


  • HisOneTrueLove6107
    November 28, 2005
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    Wow... really the only concern here is the spelling mistakes and I'm having trouble with seeing the content. Otherwise, I loved it. Good luck in the contest, thank you for entering and keep up the good penning.
    ~Lullaby