Word Doodle

Her hair rippled as it sliced the air, whipping through the shadows and dancing toward the light. Rainbow colours splashed over her like water, and reflected off her glistening hair as she rose.1

Author notes

A small couple of lines inspired by an old doodle that I found in my notebook. I'm doing a lot of these lately, mainly because it's fun and interesting to just write a few lines about something. I do these word doodles by just looking at a picture and then just describing it or making a small story about it. This one was supposed to be about somebody rising up. Hmm... it looked so much longer on paper. Oh well. Look for more of these to come, because I just love writing them Originally posted on deviantart

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  • Hannah
    November 29, 2005
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    Thank you for the comment, and the idea. I was actually wondering if I could use them in a short story sometime. Nice name by the way


  • Sir Ima Cucumber
    November 26, 2005
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    It lloks fun. And the best thing is, you have them handy when you want to use them in a longer piece. It would be interesting to see this applied to a story.