Snapes Secret

Harry wondered the halls under his invisibility cloak looking for Professor Senap's room. He was curious to who she was and why she was here. She was from the states he knew this, but why did Dumbldore call her especially call her here? She knew the dark arts well enough to teach them. How did Dumbledore know her? He passed her room. He heard shouting on the other side of the big wooden door so he paused before he entered.1

"Oh, Severus, you never change do you!" Professor Senap shouted.2

"And by that you mean I am just as you are! My blood runs through your veins Aurora do not forget this!" An evil sniveling drawl permeated through the thick wooden door. Harry's mouth dropped open. Was he hearing what he think he was hearing?3

"Don't worry father dearest! I never forget it now that I have come to Hogwarts you treat me as you did when I was a child. Like nothing!" Senap shouted louder than before. 4

Harry began to put it together when he saw her at the teachers table. The long black greasy hair and the hooked nose. No wonder why he thought he saw double. It was Snapes daughter! They began to shout again and threw Harry out of his thoughts.5

"You couldn't stand the fact my mother was a muggle could you? You fell in love with a muggle and had a bunny child that you couldn't support because of your dear Dark Lord now could you! ANSWER ME!" She shouted.6

Harry imagined that she was about two inches away from each other and there dark evil eyes locked on each other in intense rage and hatred for one another, their wands held tightly so much that if they were alive they would scream in pain.7

"I have nothing to explain to you nor your mother."8

"Oh! My mother! Severus! From what I see she is still your WIFE!!!" Harry began to feel the family resemblance within the two. One was just as temperamental as the other. Neither one didn't seem to want to give up without a fight.9

"I have nothing to explain nor discuss with you. Now if you will excuse me I must take my leave. That is that you will permit?" Snape drawled rather harshly.10

"Yes, go, get out of my sight. You pathetic little worm."11

The door burst open in a fit of energy that Harry was afraid he was going to trip over his own two feet. Out of the door appeared Snape and his daughter who was looking flustered and angry with Snape. She looked so angry that she could almost kill him. She had her hand on the inside of her robes. Harry suspected that she had her fingers tightly gripped on her wand. She and Snape both were red in the face. Snape took off down the hallway. He seemed frustrated. He was going to be ill for the next class so Harry had better warn Ron and Hermione. Ron and Hermione! They would want to know. They would get a kick out of this. That Professor Senap and Professor Snape were father and daughter! Before Harry took off down the hall, Senap? He thought about the name again. The "e" was misplaced in the name. She had changed her name before coming to Hogwarts no wonder why she told Dumbledore to call her Senap. 12

Harry took off down the hall almost dancing with joy at what he had discovered. He knew this was going to be a great year at Hogwarts.13

Author notes

I wrote this when I was especially into Harry Potter and this was before Dumbledore was killed off in the sixth book of course but still I thought this was the best chapter out of the fan-fic book I had written after the fifth book came out... so I hoped you enjoyed it!!!!

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  • Bunni Baby
    January 13, 2006
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    excellent. I love Snape's daughter. She's certainly got some spunk in her. I like that you included Harry wanting to tell Ron and Hermione in the end. It added a little something extra. I love how everything was set up. I mean the way you set up the scene and the dialouge was really good. Thank you for entering my contest, good luck, and Rock on.


  • Pollywog
    December 11, 2005
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    yeah... it does help out on how the story is going.
    ~:Shay:~

  • Itsalie
    December 11, 2005
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    This does set up the other story well but I think the two are equally strong in writing.

    Both were a real pleasure to read.
    Talia

  • Pollywog
    December 9, 2005
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    Thanks for your comments on everything... I am so glad that you enjoyed it all... Harry Potter fanfic is really great... depending on the author of the piece... but anyways... I am glad that you liked all of it!!!
    ~:shay:~

  • macandrew
    December 7, 2005
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    Beautifully written. Hadn't thought of searching out this particular fanfic but you might have got me hooked.

    Well done.
    John

  • Silent Emotions
    December 7, 2005
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    i luved it. it was really good


  • tropicalgurl
    November 28, 2005
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    I liked it.All your writing has as if you are there and you should continue it.Its a start of a mini book series cause it nicely written.You should continue I would like to read more of it.Keep Writing I'll keep reading.

  • BeachBeauty
    November 27, 2005
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    it's really good!! Continue it pleeze...

  • Classified Memories
    November 26, 2005
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    Swell ^-^

    AWWW! I want more! I really liked it, it was well written. I'm a big Snape fan (I seem to love the socially awkward characters) and you did him justice.


  • frayed-hope
    November 26, 2005
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    its very good but u should definalty add another part to this add some major drama but this is a great peice of work great great job keep up the wonderful work

  • Pollywog
    November 25, 2005
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    I want you people out there who are reading this to comment on it this is the first time I showed my fan-fic to anybody. and I want to know what you all out there think of it if you don't like it I will take it off... If you do... I guess I'll write more on it....
    ~:Shay:~

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