Fishy Tale

One fish two fish red fish blue fish1

Three fish four fish less fish more fidh2

New fish old fish white fish gold fish3

Fresh fish stale fish dark fish pale fish4

Sword fish sail fish lady fish male fish5

Fried fish broiled fish raw fish boiled fish6

Some of these fish taste delicious7

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  • Mr. Kodak gold member
    November 20
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    this poem reminded me of old times back when i was a kid....you showed many different kinds of fish here, this poem is very interesting and it did in fact make me smile when i read it.....good write poet!!!


  • MrsPepper
    November 28, 2005
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    This was very good and cute. Lots of fun!!

  • Silverone
    November 28, 2005
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    I like the way you've contrasted different kind of fish. Very interesting poem and it definately made me smile.


  • Cly
    November 27, 2005
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    good

    It's interesting. Definitly interesting

  • Kilrah
    November 27, 2005
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    hehehe. This made me smile. I like that you've done with it, using kinda opposites. Really cool!

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