Chapter four:1
Malorie and Jake hung out again, and the day after that. She skipped going to the beach with her friends and stayed with Jake. She learned that he was really funny himself. He was a photographer and impressively good. She told him of her love to write and poetry. They spent hours together one night, a few days before school started, discussing Robert Frost and Walt Whitman, Elliot, Tennyson. All of which they both loved. She couldn’t even remember the last time her and Eric talked like this, She then cursed herself for thinking this way of Eric, but Jake had a huge effect on her. On that night of their poetry readings they sat up in his room until three in the morning talking and enjoying each other’s company. Jakes mom liked Malorie so she didn’t mind her being there until all hours of the night. And Malorie’s mom didn’t really mind either. Jake laid on his bed, on his stomach and she sat up against the side of the bed. He read the words of Walt Whitman over her shoulder.2
*All goes onward and outward--nothing collapses;3
and to die is different from what any one supposed, and luckier.*4
She turned around and looked up at him. A smile spreading across his face as he thought about what it would be like to kiss her. Almost as if she read his mind, she turned herself all the way around onto her knees, her eyes saying a thousand different things. Her lips met up with his. He kissed her soft and with a passion so deep it scared them both. She was beautiful he thought as he ran his hands through her long blonde hair. They were both laying on his bed now; she was on top of him. They rolled over, his body now laying possessively over hers. She looked up at him with questions in her eyes. Then they kissed again, his tongue sweet against hers. Malorie now had things on her mind, BIG PROBLEMS. He still didn’t know about Eric, she didn’t know things would get this far. She knew she had wanted it that way, but over the past couple days she began to be able to read his eyes and they told her of his love for her. She knew hers said the same thing, but she had to tell him. She kept kissing him, unable to stop.5
“Malorie?” he whispered against her lips.6
“Hmm…” she kissed him with a ferocity she didn’t dare with Eric.7
“I love you!” she pulled away surprised. She knew that he did, but she didn’t think he would tell her. It made what she needed to tell him even harder. Her heart was racing. After minutes of just staring at him she said it.8
“I have a boyfriend!” and at that exact second both of there hearts broke into a million pieces and they were quiet for over an hour as they both returned to separate books in separate corners. Not saying anything until three a.m. when she told him that she should probably get home.9
After Jake had walked her home he went back to his room. The room smelt of her and he broke into tears. He tried to stop them, but he couldn’t and they all came.10
At Malorie’s house, she too was crying because she loved him too. But she also knew she wouldn’t get the chance to tell him anytime soon. 11
Author notes
a simple love story that turns in to a powerful Romance
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OMFG this is awsome i love it and my computer is to slow i dont like waiting to read the next part
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hey thanks so much! I must say that they were fun to write but i am kinda stuck at the moment!LOL! if you want I'll let you know when i get the next part up! thats what i have to do for alot of ppl! well again thanks! ttyl~Moony~
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Okay. I've read all the parts of this story that you've wrote so far. I enjoyed reading them all. They were all well written. And I must say JOB WELL DONE!
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thats okay u are late i do that sometimes too! LOL! but thanks so much!!! working on the next chapter halfway done!!~MOONY~
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OMG i thinks that is by far the best comment i have ever gotten!!!!thanks so much sethigirl! it means so much! i want to get it published too! just where to start at???questions! so u think that i am more superior to the already published!! i am so SMILING RIGHT NOW!!! and i am PROUD of this!!! everybody really likes this so again thanks!!!LUVS~MOONY~
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man, this story is awesome, i really hope u write more. sorry im just now reading it, im a lil late, but, dang, this is a good story and im really into it, so write more please please..., lol
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this is awesome, moonie. i love how this is going. i like how you didnt use as much dialauge in this one. the story is getting to me. its like real life. i didnt find any typos, so good job on that, too. you really should be proud of this. you are an accomplished writer, and when you are finished, i thik you should get it published, if not a novel, then a short story. this is incredible. thats why i love AP. there are so many new writers that are superior to the published ones. kudos
-sethigirl
(a random poet)
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thanks so much cas...ur way awesome!more will be up soon hopefully!LOL!~MOLLI~
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Wow! this is amazing! It's so...WOW!!!!! I LOVE IT!!! YAY!!!
Cas
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