chpt.1~Madison

Madison lay with her palm outstretched watching as the blood slowly oozed its way down her arm, a piece of jagged glass lay next to her arm and she laughed at the sight of it. 1

"I guess we havent met..." she whispered toward the glass "I'm Madison" pause "and don't worry about your name I know who you are, see we really have met before but... I guess you just don't remember me, but that's okay .. because I am still in love with you.. even if you don't remember me." staring at the glass she somehow knew she wouldn't get a response.. she knew she had gone too far this time.2

Her blood somehow made its way to her bed sheets, and slowly spilled onto the floor, she watched it making its way to happiness.. 3

"Drip, Drop, Drip, Drop" she sang as the blood dripped into a puddle.4

"Madison!!!!" Her mother screamed running into the room, she scooped Madison into her arms and ran to the bathroom, her hands shook as she cleared the blood from the split skin. "Madison why do you do this?" 5

she yelled as she bandaged her arm. 6

She only half expected an answer, Madison hadn't spoken to anyone in almost a year. Laney knew that was only half true because she had stood outside of Madison's room and listened to her sing herself to sleep and often she heard her carry on full conversations with something in her room. Laney found it hard to believe that a ten year old girl could have so much hope in dying, she remembered when Madison was just a baby she had the biggest smile and the greatest laugh, but now she hadn't laughed at anything. Her father had left when she turned  ten, she used to be daddy`s little girl but Madison had changed somehow, it had somehow been over night and she hadn't talked to anyone since then. Nobody really knew what had happened to her that made her stay so quiet. It was as if her voice had been sucked from her body.. and for Madison all that was left were tears.7

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  • Trenchmouth silver member
    November 26, 2005
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    oh my goddess, Joy this story rocks so far! i'm off to read the next part now! oh! isn't this the story you started the weekend i stayed at your house?
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    ~Arachne