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Kylie Potter ran her fingers through her hair and tried to focus her eyes on the text that was swimming before her eyes on the page. Her long wavy black hair blew across her face and rubbed at her tear stained cheeks. She got up off the abandoned swing and began to tread home to her little house on private drive. She could not believe her terrible luck in moving to such a rundown place. She had never been a good student, and had always stuck out as someone not as worth knowing. When she got mad, weird things tended to happen. She picked up a rock and tossed it up feeling the thud reverberate through her body as it fell back into her hand. She heard a squeak of tires and looked up to see a group of boys on bikes at the other edge of the block. The biggest one, who looked like a wrestler, rode up behind her and rammed into her from behind with his bike. Kylie fell to her knees, but was up almost as soon as she had hit the ground. She looked at him and felt something hot in her hand. The stone she had been throwing was glowing red and she threw it at the boy. He yelled out and swiped at his face in obvious pain. As this happened she saw her opportunity to run fast leaving her as two of his lackeys pushed her into a corner.2
“You’ll pay for hurting the big D you little bitch” the bigger one said. Kylie didn’t know what to do and as her back hit the wall her eyes closed and she flinched, imagining the worst. However all she saw was a flash of purple light and then she felt herself pressed against the wall and 4 yells and a boy yelling after them. When she dared to open her eyes she peeked out from behind her bruised lids. 3
“Hey! I’m sorry about that... Dudley is a gigantic bully.” Said a tall boy with messy black hair and green eyes that looked frighteningly familiar to her. As he studied her his eyes grew wide.4
She noticed that his black messy hair looked exactly like hers did when she had it short, always sticking up in that annoying spot in the back. And those eyes, they were the same bright green orbs that looked back at her in the mirror in the morning. 5
“Hi…” He muttered, looking at her curiously from beneath his shaggy bangs. “The name’s Harry… I live here unfortunately” Kylie just barely managed to grasp the last part of his sentence. So… he didn’t like it here. Well that was refreshing to her and before she could stop it a smile spread across her face. 6
“I’m Kylie, Kylie Potter” She extended her hand. 7
Author notes
ok if you comment ill write more if you dont comment i wont write any more of this
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Comments
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Oooooohhhoo! I LOVE it!! I especially like the way you ended it (does Harry know Kylie is his sister or doesn't he know the Kylie is his sister?)! I will be reading the next couple of parts right now!! Great write,
Keep Writing
~Sarah~
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GREAT!!!
This is such a really good story! I feel like I am actually there when I read stories. I have some of my own stories on Harry Potter that I am currently writing. If you want you can go and read them but you have to read a different one before reading mine. Love it, it's great! -
I love HP and it is so difficult finding good fan fics. I've started one about what could happen after the latest book. If you read and comment on mine - i'll coment on yours. It seems really good!
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this is awesome!
i never even though of harry having siblings.
good idea
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write more cauze this is great don't not write just cauze people dont comment that's silly but i am telling you whoever you r this is kewl good job!!!!!!!!!!!!1
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PHWOAR!!!! excellent!! i cannot wait for the next story
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