A cricket's song sounds like,the ding of a small bell. A cricket's song sounds like peace, and when a cricket sings to you, you know nature loves you. A cricket's song is the song of it's heart, it tells the cricket's story, it whispers secrets of it's life to you when it is singing. When you hear a cricket's song you know that, that song is specially made for you. You know that each note was delicately woven for you, a cricket's song sounds like the beating of its heart...its song is its life....Its life is the story it sings......
Author notes
Well I used "the cricket's song" a lot but I was trying to put it metaphorically, so I hope you like it!
thanks for reading
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Yeah my husband said he thought a bicycle bell was a fitting description when I asked him.
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Definatly the most unique so far. I was looking for something more literal but I really liked what you wrote so it doesn't really matter.
One of my favorites so far!
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