Stare

Her eyes were once warm and caring,

cold to someone else.

Her eyes were once scared and lonely,

showing how she felt.

Her eyes were once sympathetic,

listening to my pain.

Her eyes are now cold and empty,

showing her true heart.

Her eyes are now warm and caring towards someone else...

someone who is a follower, not a friend,

Was I a friend?

I shall never know,

for her eyes have now, the look you give a stranger...

someone you do not know....

Someone you do not care about...

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  • midnight wolf
    November 29, 2005
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    pretty good by the way i heard it over the phone, i tottally ( i tink i spelled that wrong) agree w/ who its about pls write more, c ya bub -gothicmoon

  • cindyrox1628
    November 25, 2005
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    it was great!!

    who is that talking about? i hope its not me! who am i? go to cindyrox1628 on usernames and guess, if u didn't kno by the name!!! i think it's really good, but kind of depressing