I want you

I could if I pressed 1

my crouches against you2

I could with words and gestures3

arouse you to breaths of pleasures4

and joyous gasps.5

I could start with kisses6

on your neck, on your mouth7

move to your earlobes8

slowly down to tease your nipples  9

lick your bellybutton.10

I could bend to my knees11

with my hand 12

find your hard cock13

with luscious mouthiness14

draw you in 15

taste the long simmering cum,16

savour you as you erupt  in glory. 17

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  • Cdoggydawg33
    December 10, 2005
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    AWSOME OOO

    ha... YAY... i really liked it... that just like reminded me of my g/f and that really made me happy... THANK YOU... its a really good writing... nice job

  • cake
    November 25, 2005
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    I forgot to thank you for the applause, much appreciated. cake

  • Kissafrog
    November 25, 2005
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    naw this really funny gay guy that I hang out with at school.

  • cake
    November 25, 2005
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    Really like who? Someone on AP?

  • Kissafrog
    November 25, 2005
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    its pretty good. I know someone who would really like this.

  • thepoisonpen
    November 24, 2005
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    nor much of a poem, but yah..

  • cake
    November 22, 2005
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    Thank you for the applauses much appreciated. cake

  • ForgottenFantasy
    November 22, 2005
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    it's good but i don't like men....

    willow

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