The Hitchhiker (chapter 15)

I closed the car door1

and went back into the house.2

Missy stayed close behind me.3

I was starting to wonder what was going on.4

I pick up a complete stranger,5

give him a lift and he takes off6

without saying thank you or goodbye.7

I got the kids up for breakfast.8

Missy and I didn't talk about Tony.9

Cynthia: "So, did you have a good sleep last night you guys?"10

Robin: "Yes mom, I did."11

Bret: "Me too, mommy."12

Stephanie: "I didn't, I was waiting for you to come home."13

Cynthia: "I am so sorry I wasn't here to give you kids a hug and kiss goodnight."14

Bret: "It's okay mommy, I forgive you."15

After the kids finished their breakfast,16

I got them dressed and ready to go17

with their grandparents for the day.18

I was thinking after they left,19

about turning on the t.v.20

and catching up on the hit and run accident.21

Around 10:00, the kids grandparents showed up to get tehm.22

They didn't stay long ,23

so it's a good thing I already24

had things packed for the kids,25

before they showed up.26

Cynthia: "Bye guys, have a good day and be good for nanny and grampy."27

All three ran back into the house 28

to give me a hug and kiss goodbye.29

"Bye mom, we love you," all three of them said at the same time.30

After the car left the driveway,31

Missy and I headed for the livingroom32

and turned on the television.33

We sat down on the couch.34

Low and behold, they were talking about35

the hit and run.36

Missy: "Just in time."37

Cynthia: "Yes, now we can find out who the victim was."38

Television Announcer: "We have a picture of the victim."39

I dropped my cup on the floor40

and it shattered.41

It was a picture of Tony, the hitchhiker.42

Cynthia: "Oh my God, that's Tony."43

Missy: "Are you sure?"44

Cynthia: "Yes, I'm positive."45

Turns out, the lonely hitchhiker was a 46

GHOST!47

Author notes

This concludes my story. I hope everybody has a chance to read it. Have fun.

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  • Shinigami
    January 1, 2004
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    It has Ended! (finally)! hehe great story or stories should i say. interesting twist at the end. One expects that Tony was the drunk driver and not the actual victim 's ghost. I half expected milly to be the drunk driver riddled with guilt feelings and Tony bieng the only surviving witness and then Milly goes on this psycho spree trying to kill tony and cyntia so she won't go to jail (thriller sytle) okkay i need some time away from my imagination hehe great story tho loved it all the way (and happy new year)

    Ness


  • StarGazer
    December 31, 2003
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    haha, I liked it, it was a very good conclusion.. didnt read the rest of them ( yet) but this really caught my attention. I wasnt expecting you to say he was a gohost, that surprised me. Wow. I really really liked this. Kudos to you. Keep it up hun. ciao
    ~StAR~