Part 10

When I arrived in the kitchen where Hayden was at. I sat down at the table while he gave me pancakes and bacon. He silently sat down and looked me in the eyes.1

"You're beautiful." He said. Then he got up with a tear in his eye and walked out the door. I tried following him but he was no where in sight. I screamed his name for what seemed like eternity. Then I started to yell for Anna until she appeared at the roof of his house.2

" Where... did Hayden go?" I said while crying my eyes out. I couldn't believe I lost him. He meant so much to me within a night. And he just got up and left.3

" He had to go to her and make sure you were ready now." Anna said while trying to calm me down. I just ran out the door.4

By the time I got half way down the road I realized I had my Parda sun glasses wiped out and a cigarette lit. I only smoked when something extremely bad happen like now. I was running by the time my lit had gone out. I finally ran into Hayden. Crying I ran up to him and jumped in his arms and we both cried for we longed for each other.5

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  • everydaysunday
    November 21, 2005
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    Interesting...I'm just a little confused. I think you'll have to explain it to me. Other than that, it was really well written. Keep it up Aubs.
    Kait