Psychosis Story

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He sat in his room, another night of old music and quite relaxation.  He needed this time from his work, although he loves it, it has become almost unbearably stressful.  Looking over thousands of computer codes never before seemed so pointless and tedious.  Never the less it bought me my food and drink.  The night seemed to be growing late, but not moving only getting darker and darker. This was strange to him but it all seemed somewhat normal. The sky had always been this black and the moon was always shining so darkly and brightly at once.  The clock moved its hands faster than normal quickly making there way to 10:00Am. He just sat there looking in to the new blackness of everything. By now he should have been at work. The phone rang and he answered it quickly and a strange voice came to his ears it sounded so scolding and angry telling him he needed to go to some non-existent office in a place called “down town”.  He simply smiled and slammed the receiver down then punched it several times, breaking it to peaces. 2

He walked out of his room and slowly to a window in the kitchen in a world that seemed like nothing but shadows, it was terrifying, he could not understand what he was looking at, so dark and cold but so bright and hot all at once.  He ran away from the window in to his bathroom and leaned agents the wall, feeling somewhat safe that there were no windows to an evil world in there. He sat cowering speaking nonsensically rocking back and forth. Slowly he picked himself up to the sink and turned on the water to rinse his hands clean of something that seemed as thought it would not come off. Then his eyes looked ahead and met the gaze of a terrible monster, in fear that it may attack he struck out as hard and he could.  The beast shattered in to bits. His hand then hurt but it did not seem to bother him at all, he had a great feeling of accomplishment having destroyed the beast in his home.  3

Soon after he moved to a great soft shape in this new world of shadows, it was comforting but so strange. He slowly began to hear it speak.  Speak of things in a way that never occurred to him before. About how all he needs to do is escape the shadows that want to lock him away. 4

“You must leave this place in a search for a new home”5

Slowly he staggered out in to the evil cold, hot, dark and, blindingly bright world of shadows.  It was strange things were so unnatural looking.  Large objects moved in single file at great speeds and, shadowy monsters constantly yelled at him from the inside of the objects.  They wanted to hurt him, so being sensible he ran screaming in to a large building with eyes that shined like bright yellow orbs. While inside the shadowy monsters tried to attack him from all sides, but he was far to smart for them. He found a weapon that shot forth lightning and thunder that chased the monsters away. Feeling good about his acts he sat down in a corner where the light seemed brightest. He soon began to drift in and out of sleep. 6

Soon new shadow monsters came to destroy him, so he began to use his lightning weapon but nothing came from it. Now filled with fear he cowered and shook on the ground. The monsters grabbed him and put him in one of the large shadowy objects that monsters had yelled at him from. They bound him and threw him in a new world of nothing but walls. He felt safe in this new world. Speaking these words before he felt so sleepy that he could not stay awake.7

“This new place under the sun, made of walls for me and me, keep me save from thee new world of eternal walls will always set the bold ones free” Then he slept deeply in his new world of walls. And never woke again8

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Man with psycosis no name...just looking for his world

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  • shatteredhope
    November 17, 2005
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    wow that was raly good and well you need to make it a book case ya that was jast so good and ya i dident want it to end so soon it was so ding good ok im don now and keep up the good wark sam out

  • IrrefutableBliss
    November 17, 2005
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    I tried to explain how much I liked this earlier, but I can't. Because I do believe that more often then not, in some distant way, my mind works like this, and it scares me how well you captured this on paper. Or computer, whatever you want to call it. I do believe that this is one of your greatest stories yet. Awsome.

    </3"Save me from the nothing I've become"
    x.x Becca


  • Glamorous
    November 17, 2005
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    Thats awesome i like how you describe everything its a good story i like how you tell it.

    <333

  • Trial and Error
    November 16, 2005
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    I'm sure it's really good. . . I'll actually read it when I can comprehend anything. . . o.o;. . . My head hurts too bad and stuff. . . I wanna die. . . And I miss Jon. . . I'm lonely. .. I may call him tonight. Jacob, his friend, said to call him on (Jacob's) his phone and tell Jon that he (Jacob ) wanted his phone back. Oh, and his lighter. . . So I'm gonna do that later o.o;. . Anywhoooo o.o; My head hurts really really bad. . so I'ma let you go with this random quote that I made up
    "No one's ugly, you're just aestheically challanged". But that doesn't apply to you cuz you're sexy
    Kat
    Edited on Nov 16, 10:18 p.m. because ''.