Crystal lay shaking and shivering. She held tight on her ankle as it relieved a small ounce of the almost unbearable pain. It was so cold... she wished she had brought a sweater. She thought of how the weather changed so quickly today.1
It had been so warm, the bright sun had shone beautifully in the sky. The sky was a pale blue not a hint of the storm to come. And yet it came. It came hard, the rain had poured, the trees barely sheltered her. She was soaked from head to toe and scared, so scared. She was all alone.2
She let out a shaky breath, then took in a small breath of icy air. She coughed and made a face. It was so cold... She looked up at the deep grey sky and sighed. ~I wanna go home.~ she though. Never did she think she would say/think that before. She was really surprised...but it faded as pain shot through her. 3
~My ankle again.~ She moaned. 4
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~Where is she?!~ He was so scared. He loved her! He decided this was all his fault. He had done this and now no one could find her. What if he never saw her again? What if she never came back? These thoughts kept flying through his mind at 100km/h . He wanted to scream.6
He wanted to see her, hear her beautiful voice, watch her eyes light up when she smiled at him. A tear rolled down his cheek.7
He continued to walk along the wet gruond, in search of his true love.8
She was so close, and yet so far away.9
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i completly agree..a next chapter is NEEDED!! dont rush though. all great things take time..
until next time
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I love the last line. Amazing cassie amazing. lol Iam like cryong. i love them. well done cassie.
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AHH! the suspense! waiting for more!~MOONY~~
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yay
i need more!!!!!!! please!!yaya -
write the next part soon!!!!!!
and plz make them longer!!!
its addictive!!!!!
to the next part!!! *i wish*
and not away!!
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