Part Six

It was about 2AM and still no one had heard from Crystal...1

The phone rang at John's house.2

"Hello?" A quiet male's voice answered.3

"Hello. My name is Grant." His voice was cold. "This is John?"4

"Yes..."5

"I'm Crystal's father."6

"Oh..?" He was at first relieved then worried. "Why are you calling so late?"7

"Well..." There was a long pause as he gathered his thoughts. "My daughter did not arrive hoe last night." He heard a quiet gasp. "You were with her today were you not?" 8

"Y-y-yes." He stuttered. "But she left, insisted she was walking home by herself." His voice was shaky.9

"Well, she never arrived home. I think YOU know where she is!" His voice raised, he was pissed, yet there was a tinge a fear in his voice; like a little boy lost in the mall, looking for his mommy. He was lost not knowing how to express his anger and fear.10

"I do not know where your daughter is. " He hung up.11

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  • zombz8me
    December 11, 2005
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    nooo where did she gooo...
    -wednesday

  • Just Listen
    November 18, 2005
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    ewww grant ewwwww. brings back memories. did you do that on purpose. Lol sounds like your father. lol i liked it
    short but i loved it
    ginny

  • WishMeAway--x
    November 17, 2005
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    AHHH!!this is scary!!going to the next!


  • I Am My Own God
    November 17, 2005
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    wow
    that was powerful
    short
    but powerful
    !!!!!

    to the next part!!!!

    and away!!!

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