My Novel

I can still tell1

just a single glance of your face2

I know your emotion3

is there a point in lieing to me4

your a book only I can read5

only I know the answers6

and you deny me7

if you want to lie8

don't look at me9

don't open up your spine10

and reveal the letters11

Author notes

Only the person whom this is about will know who I'm refering to.  This isn't about any of the 2 people everyone is goin to suspect it's about so don't go jumping to anything.

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  • November 30, 2005
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    I like dis' it's coo! I loves you, I don't really get to talk to you anymore welp I sees that you is happies,
    have fun
    ~skywalker

  • sagacious demise
    November 18, 2005
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    It's under the story thing because I log onto storywrite at school....it's better than oldpoetry.

  • bloodislikewine
    November 17, 2005
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    I want your love-child. *cough cough* Um. Yeah. This was astounding to me. I like eet. I understand what you're saying. When you know someone, you can just tell and it sucks when they are trying to lie, when they know you know it just by the look in their eyes. Great job.
    Why is this under the story thing though?
    I love you hunny.
    ♥ Natasha


  • November 16, 2005
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    Beautifully done.

    Muchlove
    Donna


  • November 16, 2005
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    that was hardcore. good job

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