My Last Kiss

He fell, dead into my loving arms.1

I wrapped my arms around him, ans slowly went into my last kiss.

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Do you ever expect me to fall in love again?

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  • Lady Pixie Greeters member
    November 16
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    and (not 'ans')

    Very sad, but powerful set of sentences here. Short and simple, but I liked them a lot- left me wanting more to the story behind the hook They were bittersweet.
    Thank you very much for your entry

    Pixie