Drabble...1

Believe me, love was but a shimmer in your eyes. They were dark, and illuminescent, almost non-existent, I swear. Charcoal black on a pale white canvas, ever so careful those eyes were. Every single move I made, they followed me. And those tresses, so dark brown, almost my favorite shade of chestnut…how I would trace the curve of your hairline. The baby hairs graced my fingertips with a nodding respect, but your skin, so pale…so refined, was enough to savor me with a suave pass-through. The perk of your nose tilts and nuzzles mine. Your arms encircle me like a blanket, and they cover me from the ongoing cold. The fire within us swirls into one flame. Keeping warm just there, together…1

Never have I felt so complete, never.

Author notes

Little gusts of words from my mind and heart put together.

And the dude in the piece is what would be seen as my dream dude. :3

♥ ♥ ♥

Inspired by:

http://lithp.deviantart.com/art/It-All-blows-142413181

http://sophie0305.deviantart.com/art/I-love-little-leaf-142473247

With love and hugs, and most importantly peace,
~Meli

P/s: More drabbles will be posted sometime this week. :3 And lol, yes...I finished my research project! (Like finally. x____X!) Presentations are this week...so I might be posting during extreme nights...or very early mornings... *is a night owl "hooooot" *)

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  • Paper.thin.paradox
    November 10

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    WHOOOOOOOOOT!!
    I
    LOVE
    IT
    !!!
    <

    ~ Amy

    • Paper.thin.paradox
      November 10
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      Most of my comment got deleted
      I was ranting about how much I loved it
      and how speechless in a non-speechless way it made me.

      LOVE IT! <3


      • Painter Meli
        November 10
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        Lol, thanks. xD

        Drabbles have their perks...sometimes... xD

        lmfao...seriously? You ranted on? *le gasp!*



        Amy, you're so wonderful

        (Thanks for the double comment, btw. )


  • Anti Creative
    November 9
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    Hahaha! You finished it? amazing What's it about?

    • Painter Meli
      November 9
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      My research paper's about the ever-changing self-image...how it hurts and helps people. (Lol, and my paper has great quotes in it )

      Lol, and thanks for the comment :3

      This drabble could use some work. x___X I don't think that I was in my right mind last night. lmao.

      • Anti Creative
        November 9

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        Hehehe, niiice, & this took you HOURs to complete, the research paper?

        & nonsense; you were in the perfect mind needed to write such a beautifully artistic 8x10 portrait

        • Painter Meli
          November 9

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          Lol. xD

          I've never written a completely factual paper before. I had trouble with putting the quotes I had...together on 5 pgs. (I'm editing the 3rd draft at the moment, btw)

          The portrait is but of his face. =( It made me sad to re-read it this morning... Anyway...

          I have critiques to issue today. Beware my stupid commentary.

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