What I like about you
I can’t really say
What I like about you
Is when you were there for me,
Ready to listen to my fears and secrets
What I like about you
Was when you kiss me,
Making sure that I will like you forever
What I like about you
Is when you showed me what life is all about,
Hoping that I will never hate the world again1
What I hate about you
I can say everything
What I hate about you
Was when you stabbed me in the back
For no reason why
What I hate about you
Was when you mistaken me for my twin,
That destroyed me as much as I could have put a gun to my head
Just to end the misery
What I hate about you
Was when I don’t think I should not care about life anymore2
You mean nothing to me and I will hate the world forever
But the number one thing that I hate about you the most
Was when you made me love you.3
Author notes
Just a poem I wrote for one of my stories.
A contest entry
- Another Poetry Contest! by Farhan.
180 points, ended November 22, 35 entries
• next story in this contest, • Add to finalists list, or remove from contest
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Comments
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cool this reminds me of 7 thing by miley cyrus. it a nice poem.
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Thanks. I wrote it a couple of years before Miley wrote the song. The only thing that is the same is the last line. I added that in after she wrote the song, only because I was researching something for another story I was writing and added it in with importmation I found for my other story.
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