Brawl the Hidden Truth: Part 15- An Apple Day

"If we're going find a doctor to check Mich's voice then who are we going to ask?" said Peach looking at Mich who was playing a game
"What about Mario's and Luigi's dad?" said Pikachu
"Dr. Mario?" said Pichu "I could get him I know where his office should have Mich going there or have the Doc come here?" asked Pichu
"I think it's best if we have the Doc come here plus he and Mario can patch things up..." said Link
"But do think if that doesn't work we can ask her to go to a kingdom to visit for a few weeks..." said Marth "it also give a changes to know her more..."
"So should I get the Doc?" said Pichu
"Sure, let's hope that Mario wouldn't reacting like the last time..." said Peach1

"Hey! Doc!" screamed Pichu in front of a office
someone pock there head out "What is it, Pichu!" shouted someone that looked like Mario but in a doctor suit
"Dr. Mario we have someone that kind of sick... well more like losing there voice..." said Pichu
"So you want me to check, huh? I guess I going have to go since it IS my job to cure people..." said Dr Mario2

"It seem that everything is okay but her voice box..." said Dr Mario after checking on Mich
"her voice box..." said Peach "What's wrong with it?"
"I don't know... but something is wrong with it..." said Dr Mario
"Hey Doc why not check on Mario?" said Link "or Luigi?"
"Na I have to go back to..." said Dr Mario then Mich wrote something
"What kind of person are you, put your work before your family if you keep doing that the bond between you and your sons would keep tearing apart even if your going the bond is still going to tearing apart, no matter who you are put your family first before anything else... So go check on your son before I make you play hardcore baseball!..." wrote Mich
"Fine... I'll check on Mario and Luigi..." said Dr Mario then walk off
"Mich how do you know this?" asked Kirby she look at KIrby
"It's something I don't wanna talk about..." she wrote and walk away everyone stare at her as she walked away
"She must know this feeling I guess..." said Pichu "So should we asked her which kingdom we should go?"
"Yeah..." said Link3

"Mario... Luigi..." said Dr Mario "How things going?"
"Fine..." both mumble looking away
"you two I think I'm going to stop as doctor and join Brawl with you two if you guys won't remind?" said Dr Mario looking at his sons
Mario look at him and smiled "of course you can-"
"but I wonder if Mich is willing though?" said Luigi "but you can ask her"
"I think I will" said Dr Mario4

"so that the reason you want to join Brawl?" wrote down Mich "since my brother likes you in Melee you can join but all else you must follow the rules of Brawl okay?" wrote down Mich then she smiled a Dr Mario
"of course I'll follow the rules..." said Dr Mario

Author notes

Ummm.. what you think? and yes I said that the Doc was Mario and Luigi father why is because if I put him a their brother it wouldn't make sense to have two sons name Mario so the only way I could put is by putting them father and son so does that answer your question?

[link] to see Dr. Mario
http://s1021.photobucket.com/albums/af334/MagicElves/?action=view¤t=DrMario.jpg

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