Unsolved Occurences

It was late evening of July. It was the senior prom, 2001. All the kids were dancing, having a great time and were all very in love.1

“Hey guys,” said Jeremy.2

“Hey Jeremy,” they all muttered back.3

“Jeremy, we don’t like you anymore,” Jamey told him.4

“Actually, we never did like you so just go away.”5

“Okay,” Jeremy mumbled. “ I have plenty of friends.” Actually, he didn’t have any other friends. That night after prom, he had to walk home because his parents worked night shift at the hospital and they couldn’t give him a ride home. There was an old building he had to walk by which everyone thought was very creepy. He turned around as he walked by it and saw a group of guys behind him that were yelling and chasing after him. He quickly bolted into the house.6

“Should we go in guys?” asked Jamey.7

“Yeah, lets go. Its just a house,” replied Arthur. They quickly ran in the house after Jeremy. As they walked onto the porch it made a loud creeeeaaaakkk sound. As they slowly entered the house they noticed a certain something. They couldn’t quite put their fingers on it. After a while… Trey figured it out.8

“Hey guys,” said Trey.9

“What?” they all replied.10

“Do you smell that?” questioned Trey.11

“Yeah, what do you suppose it is? I can’t quite tell,” Arthur replied. Just at that moment they heard a loud noise. It was coming from upstairs.12

“Should we go check it out?” asked Jamey.13

“Let’s go,” replied Trey. As they walked up the stairs they started to become very frightened. 14

Jeremy was hiding upstairs in a closet that he discovered. He was surprisingly calm. He was usually very freaked out by this house, but was more scared of the guys that were following him at the moment. He heard them talking and coming up the stairs. Jeremy thought that he might be able to scare them away. As they turned the corner of the stairs, he quickly jumped out in front of them. Jamey was so frightened that he hit Jeremy on the head, without hesitating, with a baseball bat that he was carrying. Jamey still didn’t know what happened, so he kept hitting Jeremy, the “monster,” on the head with the bat.15

“Stop,” Trey yelled. “I think he’s dead.” Jamey stopped and looked down. He couldn’t make out the persons face, so he pulled out his flashlight. He recognized the face.16

“It’s Jeremy,” Jamey announced to everyone.17

“Oh my god. What are we going to do?” Trey asked frightfully. “We’ve got to hide the body. Does anyone have any ideas? I don’t want to get in trouble.”18

“Who cares if we get in trouble? He deserved it. No one likes him anyways. No one will even notice he’s missing. Let’s just throw him in the closet and get out of here,” Jamey said. They quickly tossed the body in the closet and ran down the stairs and out the front door. It was dark out and they didn’t want to get in trouble with their parents, so they hurried on home.19

When Arthur got home he went up to his room to go to bed. He lied down in his bed and falls asleep. He woke up in the middle of the night and feels something dripping from his ceiling. He wipes something off of his forehead and looks at it. It’s very dark red. It looks like blood. He looks up and sees nothing. He thinks he is dreaming so he lies back down and goes to sleep. 20

The next day, they all met up at the park. 21

“What should we do guys?” Arthur asked the others.22

“ I’m not sure, should we go to the police and tell them that it was an accident? Or should we just let it go and forget about it and hope we don’t get caught,” Trey replied.23

“Let’s just let it go for now,” Jamey decided. Just at that moment they heard a car squeal. They quickly ran to the road to investigate. They didn’t see anything at first. Right when they started to turn back, Arthur saw it. 24

“Look guys, it’s that car over there. The one with blacked out windows.” Arthur said. Just as the car turned the corner they all noticed something. 25

“Uh Oh guys. Someone knows what we did,” Jamey said. “Look at the window. It says “I will get you for what you did”. It’s also written in blood.”26

“What should we do?” Trey asked.27

“Let’s go back and get the body and we can bury it in the cemetery or something. Maybe the person who wrote that won’t be as upset with us anymore,” Arthur suggested. 28

They all ran back to the house. They walked straight in and went up the stairs to the closet that they left the corpse in.29

“Okay, I’ll get the head and you get the feet,” Jamey told Trey.30

“I’ll look out for anyone that may be passing by,” Arthur told them.31

“Okay, drop him right here,” Jamey told Trey when they got to the front door. “Okay, now I’ll run home and get my car real quick. You guys stay here.” Jamey left Trey and Arthur alone in the creepy house.32

After a while they started hearing noises.33

“Did you hear that?” Trey asked.34

“No, what did you hear?” Arthur replied.35

“I thought I heard someone.”36

“Maybe you were just hallucinating.”37

“Yeah I guess. It’s just something about this house. It gives me the creeps.” Just then they both heard something and turned toward the noise. It came from the front window. They both hurried over to the window and were shocked. There was something laying in the yard.38

“It’s the…” Trey said. 39

“Bat,” Arthur finished for him.40

“There’s blood on it.”41

“I thought Jamey put the bat through a wood chipper and threw it in the trash.”42

“He did Arthur, I watched him do it.”43

“Maybe the bat is just a coincidence”44

Just then Jamey pulled up in his car and started walking up to the door.45

“Hey guys, why do you look like that?” Jamey questioned.46

“Look!” Arthur replied as he pointed to the front yard.47

“What are you talking about Arthur? There’s nothing there.” Jamey replied as he looked over to the yard. Arthur looked over and to his surprise the bat was gone.48

“How could that be?” Trey asked Arthur.49

“It was just there a minute go Jamey. It was a bat with blood all over it. Both me and Trey saw it and now it’s all of a sudden gone and I didn’t see anyone take it and I’ve been standing here the whole time,” Arthur told Jamey.50

“You guys are just seeing things,” Jamey told them. “You’re just so freaked out that we’re going to get caught. C’mon guys we’re not going to get caught. There’s no way.”51

“Yeah, I guess your right man. Let’s hurry up and get the body in the trunk.” Trey said as they quickly took the body and tossed it in the trunk. They drove to the woods in the park so that they could bury Jeremy’s body. They pulled into the park and parked the car and they all jumped out. They quickly scanned the park to make sure no one else was around before they took the body out of the trunk.52

“Okay guys, I don’t see anyone. Open the trunk and get the body out,” Arthur told Jamey and Trey.53

“Okay, I got his feet,” Trey told Jamey. They quickly ran into the woods with the body and walked in about 500 feet and stopped.54

“Okay, Trey, you start digging here,” Jamey told Trey as he handed him a shovel. Jamey then paced off about another seven feet so that they would have enough room to fit the body into the hole. “Okay stop. The hole is big enough. Toss the body in and then we will start to fill the hole.”55

“Make sure the dirt is packed down tight,” Trey said.56

“Hurry up guys, I want to get out of here,” Arthur said.57

“Okay we’re all done,” Jamey announced. There was a moment of silence. “Did you hear that?”58

“Yes, I think someone is following us. Let’s just walk slowly and casually out so we don’t look suspicious,” Arthur said.59

“You there, stop!” the mysterious man said.60

“RUN!” Jamey yelled at the top of his lungs. They all ran as fast as they could out of the woods. They were about 100 feet from the edge when they saw something just outside of the woods. They stopped dead in their tracks. It was the man. He was standing there with a knife in his hand.61

“I will get you!” the man yelled at them. 62

“C’mon guys! We’ve got to get out of here!” Jamey yelled as they were running across train tracks.63

“I can’t take it anymore!” Arthur yelled. He ran off of the train tracks and dove head first into the pond. 64

“There’s nothing we can do about it Trey,” Jamey said. “We’ve got to keep running if we want to live.” They were 10 blocks away from Trey’s house when they saw a car. It had all blacked out windows. Their adrenaline was racing. They had to turn around and run towards Jamey’s house. The car was in their way.65

They were right in front of Jamey’s house. As they crossed the street they heard an engine rev. Then Jamey heard a loud “THUNK.” He turned as he ran. Trey was dead. The car had hit him. Jamey kept running and got into his house. He quickly locked all the doors and windows. He was home for about an hour now and nothing had happened. He started to walk up the stairs and heard someone say, “He didn’t deserve what you did to him.” Jamey turned around and the next thing he knew… well he didn’t know. He was dead.66

“The job is done,” the man said.67

“Thank You,” another man said.68

This is my first story and I just want to know how I did. Thanks

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  • namelessgirl
    November 8
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    Cool.

    I think that the story line was good. I liked it.