It was a dark but warm night. Even though it was only about quarter to eight it was still really dark. I was never one to be afraid of the dark but for some reason I felt like I was being watched. Nobody was around to watch me, so I was blaming it on my nerves. Tonight was my 9 month anniversary, with my long time boyfriend and life long close friend, Kyle. 1
We were happy as ever. I was surprised I hadn’t caught him cheating on me. Even though I was relatively pretty I wasn’t the head cheerleader. She was the biggest hooker at school. She has slept with every hot guy in our school at least once. And we are the biggest school in the area. So that’s a lot of guys. I’m not saying she isn’t nice and all but I really try to avoid having to be with her for more than ten minutes.2
I feel safer knowing that she isn’t Kyle’s girl next door now. She moved to the other side of the city. That’s a 20 minute dive away from here. I also worry about being cheated on because Kyle and Miss Cheerleader, Kiki re going out but he dumped her for me. So I worry she might try to steal him back. I won’t have to worry about that for much longer.3
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ok you seriously need spell check for one. and know a bit more gramar. it was a good idea but you need to work on it. describe the guys the surroundings. anyway good try.
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First off describe what these guys look like EXACTLY, and "aaround" is around. i's? For a 20 year old I would have hoped you would know I is always capitalized. Justt? For heavens sakes read over your story. Anixversery? What in the world is that? Restuarnt? Spell check... Alright I will in fact read this, and I'd probably enjoy reading this. I'm not going to until you run this through a spell checker, and read over it for small grammatical errors. Readers would highly appreciate it.
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