The bloody corpse laid before me as I stood up. "Shouldn't have fucked my wife," I whispered, walking away.
Author notes
Blow your socks off? 
A contest entry
- Stun Me in 2 Sentences by Lady Pixie.
175 points, ended November 17, 52 entries
Honorable mention
• next story in this contest, remove from contest
Comments
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oooh... creepy set of sentences
But really does hook a reader in and makes me want to know what exactly happened that led up to these sentences.
Great work 
I liked these. Thanks for your entry! 
Pixie
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