Red rose

I walked along the hard pavement, my feet ached from all the walking, I passed my mothers grave, the hard stone ingraved with her name. Tears slid down my cheeks, I couldn't just stand here. I walked passed her grave like I'd never seen it. Then I ran away, fast from the grave yard, trying to leave my troubles behind. There I stummbled across a patch of red roses, they seemed almost fake, I tryed pulling one of, but doing so I cut my finger, the blood oozed out bright red. I sucked on it to stop the bleeding. With my knife which I found in my pocket I cut it off the vine. Then I ran all the way back to the grave yard. Were I found my mothers grave and placed the red rose, on top. 1

"Rest in peace." 2

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  • Peace Kitty
    November 9
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    it SO much!

    RIP Bella, Luna, and Gem

    (is tat rite, soz if its not)


  • Peace Kitty
    November 8
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    OMG

    OMG!!! Monkey that is SOOOOOOOOOOO good! It's brilliant i it!!!