[ I laid helplessly on the tiled floor. Unable to move. my eyes flicked around the room, my fingers twitched. It was the best cry for help I could muster. I felt numb, which was a lot better than earlier, the pain had now gotten intense enough I couldn’t

I laid helplessly on the tiled floor. Unable to move. my eyes flicked around the room, my fingers twitched. It was the best cry for help I could muster. I felt numb, which was a lot better than earlier, the pain had now gotten intense enough I couldn’t feel. 1

I was dieing, bleeding, knowing who had put me here. In the back of my mind I knew. I felt a sharp pain in my chest and I gagged up blood, nearly choking. Then I knew I had lost, I was going to die here on the floor of my uncle’s kitchen. I wasn’t even home, I was on vacation here. I was thousands of miles away from home visiting my friend…My friend, My mind trailed off into thinking about what would happen? Who would find me? What to do?2

By now I was gasping for air to reach my failing lungs, my chest rattled with the effort. I fluted my eyes open again to take one last look at the world as I knew it. All I saw in my vision was the kitchen sink, a window, a few cabinets and the black and white floor I was on.3

Another burst of pain ripped through my entire body. My heart thumped a final throb that sent blood gush through my body one last time. I tasted the blood return in my mouth and my wounds oozed again. Then, nothing. 4

I felt my body stiffen as I desperately tried the regain grasp of my vital living functions again. I tried to make myself breathe again but I just choked, I tried to get my heart to pulse again to no avail. After a few seconds that dragged like an eternity I had no more energy to fight anymore. It was over and I had lost the battle against him, against me. The enemy won.5

I started to slip I could feel it. I exhaled all those empty tries to inhale. My eyes closed but not to dreams or nightmares but to the eternal sleep of vast blackness that was death. I fell out of my conscious memory, myself, from earth and time. Right then I Died.6

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what should i do next?

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