Stricken Sicknesses

With blood falling like rain Travis awoke to a world not like it was but it was the end, the apocolypse. Gripped with shear terror his first instinct was to yell for someone, anyone but the only answer returned was silence. Just as this was occuring to him he realised that the warm mush that he was laying on was a pile of bodies, he could just make out a door beyond a decomposing corpse, he clawed his way through the tangle of a mass grave he was laying in as he reached for the handle to the door it flung open, a man covered in blood with a large pistol and a machete grabed him by his collar and pulled him up of the ground to eye level the mans breath reaked of rotten flesh and blood. Travis only being thirteen was scared and very confused. The man slammed travis against the wall several times then brought him back up to eye level, the mans eyes they were hollow no collor just black with a sort of yellow ooze coming from the corners of his eyes. the man violently threw travis to the floor and started dragging him barging through doors down hallways just then the man flung travis onto a table and before travis could react the man grabbed a pair of plyers and began tearing Travis's finger nails off TRavis screamed in agonizing pain. Travis closed his eyes to try to escape the seering pain. After the man finished with Travis's fingernails he began lickin the blood dripping from his hands the man took a few steps back, raised the huge machete and just as he was about to swing Travis heard a door being kicked oopen he looked up to see a man with a shotgun blow his tomentors head all over Travis's shirt and in his mouth Travis spit to get the taste of decaying brain matter out of his mouth. The man grabbed him and rushed him through hallways and doors until they came to a locked door, they both stopped they heard running and shrill unhuman like groans and hisses. The man pointed the gun at the door and blew the lock off then handed Travis a pistol. The running was getting closer then he saw them, all of them it looked like all of the neighborhood was dead then a large crowd sprang around the corner one of them jumped at travis's rescuer the man seemed almost happy to blow a hole in the attackers torso exposing bloated intestines and guts. Travis pointed the pistol in the crowds direction and over and over again pulled the trigger of the pistol until he heard a click the man told travis to hide travis ran with all he had down the ally until he came to a car he climbed inside and locked the doors he looked in the back seat at the grusome scene an entire string of intestine and blood strung from a torso. The torso looked as if it had been eaten. All Travis could hear was the blast of the mans shot gun over and over.

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This is just chapter one plz comment and tell me what you think i could do to make it better

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