The Must of Rusk

I came into school looking horrible. I was scared to see him at such an ugly state. He looked at me and still smiled at me as if i looked like i was going to a prom. I wonder why we can't even be friends. He is sitting in front of me right now and i can smell his cologne. The intoxicating scent of his rusk just made me want to have him right there, but he could never love me like i love him. He always looks up when he sees me. I wonder why he smiles at me. He's writing again and my heart is in my throat. I'm choking emotional tears out so loud that no one can hear them.1

The boy i devote my life to just chooses not to notice me but his scent won't leave me alone...2

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  • November 17, 2005
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    Oh my........... his scent! Such awesome poetry Arrow. I love you. xox

  • mind of a dreamer
    November 15, 2005
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    The boy i devote my life to just chooses not to notice me but his scent won't leave me alone... *dies* that was so hot I loved reading this one oooohhh you have a hot mind on you sam