Ashcroft the city of the dead.

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The moon glares over the small town of Ashcroft. The town was a quite polite town. Until the zombies and there zombie king took over. Everyone left the town or they were turned into zombies. Nobody knew about the zombies accept one man. His name was Rocky. He has been killing demons and zombies for years. He usually works alone but this time he needs a team. While he goes to find a team the zombies cause more and more chaos everyday. He finds his first team member. His name is Briggs. His creed is defender. A defender defends the innocent. The second member he finds is Rains. Rain creed is destroyer. A destroyer destroys all evil. The third member is Kilika. His creed is strategist. A strategist is the brains of the operation. Rocky says” my creed is leader.” A leader leads the way on the mission. The team moves on to Ashcroft. Can Rocky and his team save Ashcroft? Rocky and his team are two days of track already. They finally make it to Ashcroft. As soon as they get to Ashcroft a big fight breaks loose. Kilika discovers you must shoot them in the head or chop there head off to kill them. After three hours of grueling battle. The team fined a safe place to rest. Rocky says” this will be our base.” Briggs and Kilika hook up all the computers and there weapons are put in weapon cabinet. Briggs finds out some bad news. They don’t have much ammo left. Out of nowhere Rains says” we need to get some.” They were all surprised to here Rains speak. Rocky sends Rains and Briggs to get more ammo. They fight there way through the hundreds of zombies. Finally they find some ammo. Briggs also fined some new weapons and some silver pieces. They take the weapons back to the base. Briggs gives Rocky the silver. Rocky ask Kilika to make some special bullets. Kilika made three bullets for each weapon. Weeks go by of fighting and striving for there life. After being there for two months Rocky dies. Briggs and Rains berry him. Rains is the only one qualified to become the leader. Rains sends for Duaragon. Duaragon is an avenger. Avengers avenge the death of the innocent. But this time Duaragon is here to avenge the death of his friend Rocky. Kilika detects the zombie king. Rains says” the zombie king is a necromancer.” The team moves out for the team of the undead. Duaragon kills everybody quickly. Duaragon looks and sees the king. Kilika says” the necromancer is Volt.” A fight breaks loose between Duaragon and Volt. Duaragon beats Volt through the whole fight. But out of nowhere Volt comes out to be the winner. But Duaragon still lives. Rains was plotting a plan to kill Volt and his army of the undead. One night the team gets a strange knock on the door. Rains opens the door. A man walks in the door. He pulls the hood off of his head. It’s cloud. Clouds creed is leader. Cloud says” I’m here to for fill the spot of my brother Rocky. Cloud takes over the team. Rains tell Cloud his plan. Cloud decides to use Rains plan. Duaragon can’t wait to see Volt again. Duaragon, Briggs, and Cloud were talking one night. When Duaragon say’s” I have a confession to make.” “What” say’s Cloud. Duaragon tells the story of how Volt and Rains are his brothers. Kilika sends news that the zombies are on the loose. They move out on there mission. They see hundreds of zombies. This time they will fight for there lives. Cloud say’s” there are more and more coming.” Duaragon say’s” I’m going for Volt.” Duaragon fights his way to Volt. When he gets there Volt is waiting. As soon as Volt sees Duaragon he bring Rocky back to life. Volt tells Rocky to kill Duaragon. Rocky is beating Duaragon to death. Until Cloud shows up to save him from Rocky. Cloud kills His brother regretfully. Duaragon and Volt start to fight. But this time Volt kills his brother. Finally Rains Briggs and Kilika show up to the fight. Rains say’s” Volt you me and Duaragon are brothers. You killed my brother I must kill you.” Rains and Volt start fighting. Rains breaks Volt’s arm. Out of nowhere Volt disappears into thin air. Rains screams” no how did he get away.” “Come on” say’s cloud. Rains can’t sleep for day. Finally the zombies attack again. Rains is fighting his way to Volt. Rains kills everything in his pathway. Volt sees his brother and gets ready to fight. Rains, Cloud, Briggs, and Kilika kill all the zombies. Rains say’s” it’s your turn to die. Volt and Rains start to fight. Sadly Volt breaks Rains neck an kills him instantly. Cloud screams” no you killed my friend, you must pay. Cloud starts to beat Volt to death. Finally Volts rein of terror is over. Finally Ashcroft and the world is safe again. Thinks to the men who fought the zombies we are safe.2

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  • pyschopath247
    November 22, 2005
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    wow i really enjoyed it!!! keep it up

  • FairyFlys88
    November 22, 2005
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    This is well written, its different. surprise ending and how it did come togather. It was a good write keep up he good work!