Commune, Chapter 1 (part c)

Alicia left the bathroom, Her Bare feet barely making a sound as she walked To Hester's room. Dave had left, no surprises there, Alicia didn't mind, That had always been daves problem, he was always so Complacent, and tonight had been the first display of any...Aggression he'd actively displayed. Sure he'd always made his feelings on those involved in "That lifestyle" As he liked to put it, clear. But it had always been done so...Politely.1

Long story short, Dave played the game.2

And it made Alicia sick.3

Not that she'd never played the game, She'd play the game, She was certainly very good at it, Perfect, in fact, But she'd only play the game If she got Enjoyment out of it, Dave played the game to Keep the peace, what was he'd said? "Don't rock the-" Alicia stepped into Hester's room, the spare bed set out on the floor, a good foot and half below Hester's one. It was a cold night, So Alicia took the blankets from the now Abandoned bed on the floor, and lay them over Hesters bed, which she then hopped "Boat" Into.4

Alicia giggled, Honest Laughter, not that cynical Oh yes well done chuckle most everyone had been exposed to at some stage at another, Mind you, Hester had heard this laugh, and Nervously informed Alicia that this honest Unrestrained laughter was in fact, rather worse. She'd smiled at the time, And it still brought back a smirk.Alicia's thoughts trailed away As Hester entered the room, her pale form complimented By the moonlight streaming in through the window. Alicia felt an intense wanting, one she'd always been able to ignore previously, one which tonight she Didn't think she would be able to ignore...No, she didn't want to ignore it, She was Alicia, and she always got what she wanted, and tonight, tonight she wanted to own Hester..5

"Het" She said, her firmer then usual tone conflicting with Hester's pet name.6

Hester looked at her, her eyes wet and glistening in the moonight, She had been crying, Alicia noticed, thats good, it will make this easier.7

"Het, come to bed, Now. Okay?"8

Hester did.

Hmm, Is Alicia coming across too "steriotypical dominatrix"?

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