Twilly the littlest puppy

Once upon a time, there was a puppy called Twilly. She had a lot of big brothers and sisters and they teased Twilly really badly since she was the littlest puppy. But Twilly's mother conforted Twilly, which made her feel much better. At the pet shop in a glass box wasn't very exciting for Twilly. She badly wanted someone to care for her and take her home.
"Out of the way Twitch," one of Twilly's brothers said. Twitch was Twilly's nickname, and she didn't like it at all.
"Yeah Twitch. GIve your big brother some room," one of Twilly's sister snickered. Twilly felt sad. 1

One day, a family came in to look at the puppies.
"Look as cute as you can little ones!" Twilly's mother adviced. THe family reached in to pull a puppy out. But it wasn't Twilly.
"Never mind Twilly," her mother comforted. "You will find a home one day."
"But I'm the littlest in the litter!" Twilly cried. "No - one will have ME!"
"You're just special, that's all," her mother went on. But Twilly didn't feel at all special.
"Look at Twilly sulking," one of Twilly's sister laughed.
"Yeah, last one's a baby," one of Twilly's brother sang. It made Twilly feel sadder then ever. 2

Soon, one by one, Twilly's brothers and sisters had a new home. Even Twilly's mother had a new home too! Twilly was the only one in her glass box, and it didn't feel so bad then. She had all the room to herself and had all the food to herself. But most of all, she missed her mother, sisters and brothers. 3

One day, Twilly sat in her box alone. Suddenly, the door of the pet shop opened and something picked Twilly up. Twilly found herself in the hands of a little girl, called Penny.
"Aww, they left her last for me!" she exclaimed. Twilly was excited. Soon, she relized that her house was just next door! 4

A few days after, Penny took Twilly to the park. Twilly was surprised to her her mother there, along with her brothers and sisters!
"Hello, Twitch!" one of her brothers greeted. Twilly relized that her brother had shrunk. Twilly was up to his shoulder! When Twilly asked her mother, her mother laughed.
"He hadn't shrunk, silly! It's all that food Penny gave you!" Twilly laughed as well and played with her brothers and sisters. When she ran past her mother, her mother couldn't stop smiling.
"Last one's a baby!" Twilly yelled to her.

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  • Loopy Lou 1998
    November 8

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    This story was very good in the sense that it had mixed emotions in it and it kept me reading all of the time. Thankyou for writing this story and well done. Keep writing.

    Louise