Solitude

People say1

That there are worse things2

Than loneliness3

Don’t believe them ...4


Friends slip5

Like grains through our fingers6

A tiny slip of our lips7

And there is nothing left in our hands 8

Except an empty empty feeling.9


In the morning you’re surrounded10

By the evening you’re alone11

Something happened, what happened?12

Why is there no one around except our oldest friend13

Solitude.14


People say15

That there are worse things16

Than loneliness17

Don’t believe them ...18


I have felt19

Most of my life20

The kind of solitude21

That gets the best of us22

To cry23


Please tell me there’s an end to these troubles!24

Please tell me there’s a light somewhere!25

At the end of this tunnel.26

Please tell me some of those people will27

Stay.28


But friends slip29

Like grains through my fingers30

A tiny slip of my lips31

And there is nothing left in my hands 32

Except an empty empty feeling.33


People say34

That there are worse things35

Than loneliness36

Don’t believe them ...37


I picked you38

Out of a crowd of everyone39

You let me down40

Was this our fate?41

Or did we just mess up a good thing.42


You picked me43

Out of a crowd of everyone44

I let you down45

Was this our fate?46

Or did we just mess up a good thing.47


People say48

That there are worse things49

Than loneliness50

Don’t believe them ...51


But friends slip52

Like grains through my fingers53

A tiny slip of my lips54

And there is nothing left in my hands 55

Except an empty empty feeling.56


People say57

That there are worse things58

Than loneliness59

Don’t believe them ...60


People say61

That there are worse things62

Than loneliness63

Don’t believe them ...64

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  • Marta gold member
    November 11
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    I like the song....but, I have to say that I have never felt lonely--I am one of those people who are self-contained and loneliness isn't a problem for me...being alone and finding time to be alone is...alot of people in my life, even when I don't care for sompany....friends, family,lovers,ex-husbands and even strangers gravitate to me...I still like the song, it's nice and I wouldn't mind hearing the vocals on it.

    beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.


  • DarkDancer101
    November 8
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    very good dude. I so freaking agree with yu on this.

  • Damn!!
    trust me to be the one who makes the second comment
    *has Mems words in her face ...* lol

    And this was Soo Soo SO sweet. i especialy like
    'But friends slip
    Like grains through my fingers'
    Brought back memorys, so sweet. You know what you have to do now, warm up your voice!! i wanna see


  • Lekos Memory
    November 7
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    MUHAHAHAHAHA FIRST COMMENT!!! IN YOUR FACE SECOND COMMENT!!! BOO YAY!!

    okay with that out of the way onto your song. All I can say is this is very good. Definitely true to some people and to other people they will think this is dead wrong. Me, myself, am borderline.

    Loneliness is hard to deal with. I fear being abandon or left behind. (total true story) but I can't think of anything worst than loneliness.

    • Dark Legend
      November 7
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      Well, those that think it´s wrong haven´t experienced it obviously

      but thanks for the comment. AND SUPER THANKS FOR FIRST COMMENT! YAY!!!

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