Leading the five was a stooped figure, completely encased in a dark robe and hood. He carried the only source of light. The torch flickered and threw grotesque shadows across the ground. When the light moved on, the shadows swallowed the road.2
The six dark shadows approached the weathered sign post. The sickly vines were (insert height when figure it out) high. Their orange tipped leaves showing red in the sparse light.3
At the base of the post the five laid their gifts, each giving a silent prayer of thanks for the harvest.4
When they were all standing side-by-side in front of the sign, the leader brought out a small slab of stone from underneath his robe, and a mason jar of a burgundy liquid.5
Laying the stone on the hard packed ground near the crops, he knelt and raised the jar to the night sky. The moon was pregnant, as full as it could be. It's light shaded by the autumn clouds brushing up against it's belly.6
Suddenly, he splashed the thick liquid onto the lined crops and then poured the remaining contents onto the middle of the smooth stone.7
"Thank you, Lares for our harvest. We offer wheat from our finest fields. Along with potatoes, corn, tomatoes and the sacred sunflowers.8
We ask that you bless next year's harvest and keep our families safe."9
As the last of the liquid soaked into the ground, the stooped figure stood and walked back the way the six had come.10
One hurried to catch him, as the others slowly shuffled after them.11
"Charlie, a word." He laid a calloused hand on the robed figure.12
"Yes, Wayne," Charlie replied, slowing his pace.13
Wayne rubbed his chin nervously as he fell in step with Charlie. "You think it'll be enough?" He stuck his long fingers in his jean's pocket.14
Charlie didn't take his eyes from the path. The ground wasn't as clear as the road, one could twist an ankle walking back.15
"The gifts weren't as plentiful as in the past." Wayne again rubbed his chin.16
The night was silent around them. Nocturnal animals had cleared at the sixes presences and the insects, if there, were quiet.17
The rich scent of moist earth mingled with the fresh pine scent. Small puffs of air billowed out from their breath. Wayne shrunk into himself rethinking the light flannel jacket, wishing for his thicker coat.18
"The gifts will be fine. But we must return just after the new year. What crops will be ready at the time?" Charlie asked, his head still deep in his hood.19
"Howard's growing onions and radishes and spinach at my house." He paused. "Tom's trying broccoli, but so far he's stuggling to keep the vermin from eating the sprouts."20
Charlie said nothing as they entered the trees. Here the animals scurried under bushes, no longer afraid of the location, only the travelers in the familiar terrain.21
"It'll do," he replied. "It'll have to."22
Charlie felt silent and after a while Wayne dropped back, thinking that the sunflowers had better be harvested soon.23
There was no more conversation.24
Author notes
Lares were worshipped as Roman household gods or deities. The were presumed to be Mercury (god of profit, trade and commerce) and Lara (nymph, daughter of the river Almo), incapable of keeping secrets, sons.
Festival of the Laras was called Compitalio. This was celebrated a few days after Saturnalia.
Saturnalia ~ December 17th.
In Rome, the spirits of the fields, known as Lares, would meet each year at Crossroads, where farmers would celebrate their crops and after the blood of sacrificed animals to the Lares. Crossroads would often be marked with boundary stones and animal blood and other gifts would be placed on the stones through out the year.
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Hey Brooke,
An interesting tale you're spinning here. Was the burgundy liquid blood? I know blood sacrifice was one of the elements required when I attended the ceremonies back in the day. *laughs*
I did notice a couple of things you might want to look at.
Para1-line2 ripen(ed) or ripe
same para-line5 'attached'
Para7-line2 remain(ing)
Para20-line1 strike 'is'
Para22 "It'll do," he said. (")it'll have to."
That's it
Steve

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Thanks Steve. Will get those fixed.
Not sure where this piece will go but it was there, so it is now down on paper. It needs expanding but will wait until I figure out where it is going
Thanks again
Brooke
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