Raining on my Agony

Smiles passing between two forces,
Forever frozen in my breath.
I cannot live without you,
I cannot breathe without you.
Obsidian eyes and skin of silk,
Touching you,
Feeling you.
Life just another thing to lose,
Whenever you're gone I think this.
Your kiss is my medicine,
Without which I suffer slowly.
Your smile drowns the pain,
Raining hard upon my agony.
Tiresome days no more,
For me they've ended.
Kiss me,
Fool.
Take the pain away.
I am forever yours.

Author notes

Whatever you end up thinking about this poem, please put it in your comment below. It is meant to depict somebody's love cleansing the pain away. However, if you interpreted this poetry differently please say so. Any suggestions are welcome as well. I'm still working on poetry.

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