Peddle to the Metal

I saw him take a piece of paper out of his book bag. He grabbed a blue pen and wrote with intense passion. It had been the first ting i'd ever seen him so convinced on. I was just watching him write. After he crumpled up his paper in frustration, i realized that he had not been confessing his undying love for me in that note. He looked at me like he knew what i was thinking. He uncrumpled his paper and gave me a sad look. I wished to know what was on that paper more than anything. I just wanted to get up and kiss him, just for being him. I hated that this secret was screamed through my eyes and i knew he could hear it through his. I wanted him to at least know my name. A boy i see everyday needs to know my name. He needs to be with me always. So, now, i'm putting the Peddle to the metal.1

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short yet sweet
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  • non-existant
    November 15, 2005
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    put that peddle to the metEl.. you heard me. with an e. DEALS . actually no not really.

    forver with an a
    love crystails

  • mind of a dreamer
    November 14, 2005
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    Sam this is so sexy I love this poem a lot I just wanted to let you know how much I love this and that I have just written a respond to it and I'll show you tomorrow in school and you'll die cause you'll love it so much peace and love my friend