Coconut Coalescense

My slender fingertips effortlessly floated over her bronze back as the oil beads sparkled like diamonds in the sun. I inhaled a bouquet of sea salt and coconut oil, exhaling softly as I slowly lowered my lips to her ear whispering again, "Will you?"

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I imagine this to be the perfect moment.

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  • Lady Pixie Greeters member
    November 16
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    Aw, beautiful and romantic with a lovely visual!
    Great work and great set of sentences
    Thank you very much for your entry!

    Pixie


  • Onomarith
    November 7
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    no

    I will not, because I love someone else, LonesomeDove!
    just kidding, I only love you!
    just kidding, I am just and only kidding

    best of luck in the contest!