Mr.Sanchez likes going out to his favorite bar on Oak Sreet. He was driving home....Drunk to be exact everything he saw was a blur. He was going about 95 MPH. At about 1:30 AM Cops got a disturbance call of tire screeching. Cops were looking for the suspects car. The cops finnaly caught up with the suspects car at about 2:00 AM the car was a: A blue BMW Coupe, Just as the caller desribed. Pretty soon red and blue lights lit up the streets of Manhattan. It turned from a quiet search into a wild goose chase. Mr. Sanchez hit 105 MPH as soon as he got on the free way cops were on a high speed chase. At about 3:00 AM Mr. Sanchez got of at an intersection. He had led the cops 3 miles through the dark streets of New York. Finnaly Mr.Sanchez came to a dead stop. He had crashed into a nearby office buliding and on the hood was a 7 yr old boy...Killed instantly.
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- There's Been a Murder! by DaMcNuggeter.
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With a little bit of typos and some little, tiny changes, this could be quite good. Maybe some extra paragraphing.
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