The two sisters

Lying in the bed
                 The two sisters wander in their dreams
The heavy cruel day
                 Has caught up with them
The hotness in the air
                 Makes their bodies soak in sweat1

Lying in the bed2

                 The two sisters wander in their dreams 3

 4

The older girl just lays 5

                  She is done with her crying6

The younger girl sucks her thumb7

                  And breathes deeply in for air8

They seem to hear their names9

                  Out loud in the distance10

Lying in the bed 11

                  The two sisters wander in their dreams 12

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  • Shadow-Kissed
    November 14
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    Interesting. It's so simple, it's brilliant. Every line has such shallow meaning that it makes you think. Amazing work
    -Chantale