It was a long stressful day for me since now I'm in a silver borderd wheel chair. Today I would be going to a new school and thats when everything happened I gained a true friend. It started off with me going off to a free school. Witch your probaly now that means it's a poor school because my family dosen't have alot of money like the wealthys. I walke in the hall way and something bounced on my head. "OH sorry". says a girl that looks like a jester but with red skinny sweats and a black tight shirt with pompoms on her legs and angles. "Umm it's ok are you in a circus"? "Yes I am I juggle as a...jr-clown".she explained. She looked at me with total embrassesment. "It's ok at least you can do something this leg has to last maybe years"! She started to calm down so I decided to introduce myself. "Anyway I'm Merrisa you can always remmber me by the nerdy girl in the wheel chair". "Oh don't say that well my name is Jessica and if you want to play that name game you can remmber me by the weird girl that juggles for attention". "I guess you juggle for money if I could I would"! After recess I went to the bathroom to brush my hair into a pony tail. And I herd a slight bounce on the ground in the corner I saw Jessica. "Jessica what are you doing in the corner it's just me Merrisa"! She looked at me cheerfully and got up quickly. Then I remmber what my mom said this was my last day. "Jessica I have some serious news". "What just tell me your my......". her voice trailed off to see my face glum. "My leg caught a staff infection and I won't be in school for maybe about 3-4 weeks". "Oh said Jessica". And Jessica darted out of the bathroom crying. TO BE CONTINUED!!!!!
What do you think Merrisa felt when Jessica ran out of the room?
Comments
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I think its a very good story, but you have to watch your punctuation and spelling. Your characters are cleverly written, i luv them! xx
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You are doing very well but need to watch the spelling, especially remember. You forget the E between the M's.
Tisha



