He was floating. He felt intangible; unstoppable; bulletproof; and the oddest of all: invulnerable; like a miscreant who eluded penance after a murder, or a teen slithering out past curfew.
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From my story "Lullabies to You"
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love the imagery of a teen slitering out past curfew...lovely
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I liked the construction of these sentences, and much moreso the vocabulary and images you presented here.
Very intriguing set here. You sparked my curiosity for sure here. 
I would say that this definitely makes me want to know more. 
Great work and thanks for entering 
Pixie
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