Brawl the Hidden Truth: Part 12- Blinding Truth

As the light faded from the Metriod it turn to a lady with beautiful blond hair that reach to her waist, lovely hazel eyes, though her skin was pail white "Efrea... I-I..." said Himer as Mich open her eyes to be crimson still then stood up
"Speak no more, Himer, for the love of the land had took me in though the pain in misery 'tis land have took in..." spoke Efrea in a soft voice then her eyes meet Himer "Himer, for the land of Excaliban and Rina, I beg of you end this war..." cried Efrea as tears fell from her face
Himer closed his eyes for a while and reopened them then stood up "No!" the he grab his sword and when stright to Mich to put the tip of the sword next to her neck "no I can't Efrea this war could not end till the new ruler of Excaliban takes the crown of the new era!" shouted Himer "and the right hair was our daughter, Deltana, but since her passing the crown would go to the goddess of Wish, this girl" shouted Himer. Mich hold her hand into a fist
"What did you said?" said Mich her voice was bit angrily
"the little girl, you, Mattielianena!" said Himer with the sword still at Mich's neck
as flame came to Mich's crimson eyes "I hate this... die..." then the sword in Mich's right hand pierce though Himer's stomach "I hate human" said Mich coldly
Everyone stare at Mich "Mich... I-I can't believe you did that!" shout Kirby
"Mich are you..." said Zelda
"I'm competently fine" snapped Mich as the crimson grew in a darker color
Crimson look at Mich "no your not... it seem that the Wings of Crimson have took over your body..."
"The Wings of Crimson?" asked Mario
Crimson look over at Mario, Link, Kirby, Zelda, Peach, Samus "The Wings of Crimson are my creation, the creation of war... as you see I'm the goddess of Blood, or shall I say War, Crimson..."
"As I'm the goddess of Evergreen, Riot..." said Riot as she broke the chain the chain her to the ground but something was strange Mich look up to find Ridley was about to kill her1

"..." Mich was soon pin to the floor
"oh... goddess of Wish" said Himer as the blood disappear "take this neckless as our gratitude..." as RIdley force a neckless on to Mich's neck
Mich eyes crimson but nearly black when the neckless was on her Ridley got off her and Mich scream in pain "AHHHHHHHHHHHHHH~!" then Mich stood up grab the sword to only fall on her knees and blood spill of her mouth Kirby ran up to her
"Mich are you okay!" said Kirby worried
"Kirby...-" smiled Mich the there was a pause "-ah-ah-AHHHHHHHHHH-!"
Crimson eyes grew big "No...no... it can be... the Lanalia neckless...:
Riot look at Mich "at this rate she won't survive long... Lanalia..."
"AHHHHHHHHH!" screamed Mich as tears fell from her eyes "I-I-I H-H-HA-HATE H-H-HU-HUMANS!!!!!!!" screamed Mich as both Wings of Crimson and Lanalia Neckless fell off then Mich collapse...

Author notes

hope you like it! ^^ (yeah... I don't have a link for Lanalia because she not gonna appear till like the few chapters... ^^; )

Lanalia (la-na-lia)

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  • Sonic Banana
    November 5
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    Whooo! Quite nice. Not a big fan of the anime genre but this is awesome. Good work man! I love wingies.

    beginning: 4, language: 4, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.