The Child who could not get enough Candy

Once in a large city, there was a very obese boy. He did nothing but eat and eat and eat. Even after he was full, he would continue to stuff his fat face.1

On Halloween, he knew he was excited for he would get all the candy he could eat; and boy could he eat candy. It was his favorite food group as a matter of fact.2

He dressed as a ghost and went all alone into the darkness for candy. He went to hundreds and hundreds of houses and he just kept going and going until he was tired. He realized that he lost his way home. How sad.3

He confides in a stranger to help him but he has no head. Eventually they end up in the wood where the headless stranger rapes him and stuffs all the candy down the kid's throat till he chokes to death and dies.4

And that is the story of the little Obese Boy who ate too much fucking candy.5

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I tried and then after a while I gave up.

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  • LetTheBirdFly
    November 15, 2005
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    ... what an ending lol i can see how you kinda got bored with all this writing business and... kinda... quit. lol the ending just seems so random... it left me going *blink blink* and then i laughed... kind of a delayed reaction. Funny, though. Really. There is humor in your unwillingness to finish it.