The zombie hunter-1:School in the morning

Im going to tell you the story of how i became one of the best zombie hunters on the planet. It all started the morning of awards day at school:1

"Michaela, its time to get up!" screamed my grandmother at 6:00 am on a tuesday morning. I looked at the clock. "Shit!" I said through clenched teeth. Today was awards at school and I had to help Mrs.Johnson give them out to the whole entire school. I got up and examined myself in the mirror. My first thought was 'Wow, people don't just roll out of bed looking perfect'. My hair was a puff ball, my makeup was smeared, and i had on a ragged white tank top and green booty shorts. I had alot of work to do. 2

After i got out of the shower, I felt more proud of my image in the mirror, my hair was flat, and my new jeans and blouse looked awesome. I was ready to go to school. Jameson high.3

I walked to the car to find that my grandmother was already in the car. "Good morning sweetheart" she said. Something didn't seem right. As she talked, her breath drifted over to me, and it smelled like rotten eggs. Thats not like my grandmother though, she usually has a mint, or some gum with her, but i thought maybe i was just over reacting. "Good morning" I said quietly. That was the last thing i said on the ride to school. 4

-time elapsed-10 minutes-5

"Well have a good day dear" My grandmother said. "Yeah, i'll try"I grouched. I slammed the door and started making my way up the steps. I stopped halfway through, and looked back. No teachers cars were parked in the parking lot. No one was in the school. It was deserted. I thought I could have been early. I took out my phone and the time was 7:30 am. Thats when school started, but no one was here.6

I made my way down the steps. At the bottom, i had to make the decision whether to call grandmother back, or to enjoy the free day ahead of me. I decided that a cup of coffee wouldn't hurt me. 7

With my backpack over my shoulder, and phone in hand, I made my way down to the local coffee shop 'The Bean'. I came here everyday after school to get coffee, and do my homework, but most importantly to see Zeke. Zeke was two years ahead of me in school, and i had a huge crush on him. He already graduated, but he didn't go to college, so i get to see his beautiful face everyday.8

"Hey mickey, aren't you s'ppose to be in school?" he asked, a seductive grin on his face. "Naw im off today, or rather theres no one at the school." I grinned back. But then we heard the crash.9

*to be continued*10

I got the idea from a dream i had.I know that there is mistakes, but im sick today. How was it?

    : , Your review:

    Comment Suggestion: What is your your first impression?
    : Cost: 0 free left 0 points, You have 0. (?) (Line numbers)
    Ratings:

Comments


  • LilahAsh gold member
    November 5
    Edit | Reply
    i LOVED it!!! please write more!!!

  • I Write naked gold member
    November 5

    Edit | Reply
    I like that opening paragraph. Who wouldn't want to know that? Well we know something is going on. We don't know what. I like that, but I better see more soon. I don't think that time elapse thing is neccesary. I personally think it is distracting. I like how your character goes for the looser. I think it makes her a little more real. Geat jo