The Real Story Behind Live Long Chapter 6:Flaming Daisys

Recap:Kita had a window sill bed, a desk, a door leading to a bath room, and a dresser.1

That night Kita looked out at the Ocean view out her window. It took her awhile to fall asleep. That was not her natural envirnment. She had the stangest dream that night. She drempt that Deidara had killed her, she woke up and was happy it was just a dream.2

That morning Deidara woke her up. He told her to get dressed and go up the hall and she will come to the living room and thats were he would be. Kita turned on the shower and locked the door behind her. She striped down and steped into the steaming shower. She washed her hair, got out of the shower and put it in a thousands of little braids for a minute. Then let them out and put her hair up. 3

Kita put her cloak and ring on noticeing every body she saw walk pass her door had it on. She walked to the living room to see Deidara, Tobi, and Sasori, playing Mario Kart on the Wii. She ,too distrctied, sat next to Deidara who was kicking ass at Wario's Goldmine.4

"Well I see your up now Kita." Deidara said watching the 52in wide screne TV. "Yep." Kita replyed "Pretty girl have lots of resemblance to Senpai-san" Tobi said "Shut up Tobi" Deidara and Kita said at thyer same time. "Wow. Even got the atitude." Sasori said. "Shut up puppit." Kita said. "Well that just plain rude." The puppit said. Kita pulled the wheel away from the sucky Sasori and blasted him into 1st. "You suck at Mario Kart"5

Sasori got up and went into the other room, I don't know, I'm not the one who built the lair. 6

Deidara went back and let Kita make her Mii. She made the majority of it look like her and named it ,Flaming Daisys. Deidara set up her Mario Kart and Deidara, Tobi, and Kita played Mario Kart.

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  • martial artist
    November 5
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    to kagetora

    your story was short but i like it good job
    you write good keep up the good work bye now

    beginning: 5, language: 4, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 4.