Angel At HogWarts chapter 2

"Oh wow its amazig' Dazle exalimed with exictemnt. As she admried the ebds with velvet canopies, staiend glass windows, a laptop and mini tvs with dvd&vcr players for everyone. She was certainly going to love it here. "If you'd like i'll give youa tour of the rets fot he school" Malthoy offered. "Sure i'd love that" Dazzle repleid. Malthoy "great lets get started". First eh showed ehr all fo the classrooms then the nursery, the palyign field for quidtich and alstly the lirbary which Dazzle loved the most with books from wall to wall in mahogony shelevs that, the palce had gothic architecture all around it and beautiful scenary was painted on the walls. I think i'll take a brisk walk since its soooo nice today" Dazzle said. "May I use this oppurtunity to take this wlak with you, it will give us a chance to get to knwo each other so I can properly court you in time" malthoy said. He noticed Dazzle was blsuhign so deeply as her logn lashes fluttered and she lowered her ehad alittl with her ucte msile stil plastered on ehr face and said'I'm sorry it not that I don't liek you i relaly do like you alot but it just too complicated...you see.....oh nevermidn you wouldn't udnerstand anyway...' she stumbled as the wrods pilled out ehr smiel turne dinto a frown she had a few tears in her eyes and yelled "I'm so sorry" as she ran off with tears flowing out. "Damnit if only he didn't remind me so much of him,..........Allistar where have you gone she wihsepered while tryign to hold back her tears of sorrow. She went bakc to her dormory where she opened the trunk by her bed and took out aCobalt colored amulet thatw as shaped liek an angel's fetaher and put it on ebcasue it reminded her of Allistar then she took otu an animated photo of Allistar who kidna resembeld MAlthoy except he had whtie blodne hair slighty darker skin thatw as still evry fair. in the photo a scene of Allistar and Dazzle holding water orbs, it was a amemory of when thye discovered they're powers Allistar was her belvoed brother before Lord Voldermort kidnapped him and she never saw him again after that again after thta but believed he is still alive "Allistar....soem day....I'll surely find you...and save you from Lord Voldermort.....I promise" she said to herslf as she lxcutched the amuelt shape dlike an angel feather that was hsi last brithday present to Dazzle before he was kidnapped. Meanwhile at lOrd Voldermort's castle he approached Allistar and said to him "Allsiatr are you ready to pay your beloved sister Dazzle a visit my young prodigy" he asked Allistar who repleid "Yes frnakly I am anxious to see my dear Dazzle again so ill pay her alittle visit from me her beloved brother" eh said with an evil grin.................To Be Continued

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