"Yes, Itachi, hmm?" He tried to sound uninterested.2
"Mind if I come in?"3
"Whatever, un..."4
Itachi entered the room. He sat on the edge of Deidara's bed casually. "So Deidara," He began. "what was Hidan saying about you earlier?"5
"Uhm....Nothing, hmm...." Deidara toyed with the ends of his hair nervously. He tried his hardest not to pay attention to how close Itachi was to him.6
"Oh, c'mon Deidara." Itachi mock-pouted. "Why won't you tell me? Is it about me?"7
Deidara blushed. 'DAMN!!' He thought. 'Why do I have to blush NOW, of all times?!'8
Itachi chuckled. "Is that a yes? I believe it is."9
Deidara just sat there, blushing and playing with the ends of his hair. Suddenly, Itachi grabbed Deidara's wrists and pushed him down on the bed, so now Itachi was laying on top of Deidara. Deidara turned every shade of red possible.10
"Deidara, do you like me?" Itachi asked, his voice merely a breathy whisper. Deidara could smell the spicy cinnamon gum on his breath.11
"Uhmm....I-I uh...." Deidara couldn't spit it out. Itachi smirked and kissed Deidara.12
"Because," Itachi brethed between kisses. "I like you."13
By this point, Deidara could barely breathe. He just managed to squeeze out, "I-Itachi-kun, I DO like you..."14
Itachi pressed his body against Deidara's, kissing the blonde passionately. Deidara was still blushing slightly.15
"Barbie boy!!" Hidan opened the door. "You still sulking over what I tried to tell Itachi??"16
Itachi looked up. He glared at Hidan, who retreated angrily. As he left, Hidan muttered, "I can never fucking harass anyone around here without them fucking benefitting from it in some fucking way...."17
Itachi shrugged, and returned to kissing Deidara.
Author notes
xD I was sitting in y room, and I go I should write that story about Kazuko...So I picked up my pencil and I started writing. I was staring off into space while my hand wored. Then I looked down and read the quarter f it I read and I go "..." "This isn't about Kazuko..." XDD
WAS IT GOOD?
Comments
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Though I hate yaoi. I put up with it for you and Kitkat. Great job anyway. XD
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Awesome
Wow, you really are obssessed with yaoi, aren't you?
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Okay, I like it. Its very passinate, but are the characters gay?
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yupss
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YES IT WAS GOOD
I forgot to rate
I barely rate, but you diserve it for the wonderful yaoi. xD
Oh btw, what's the difference betweeen Language and Dialogee?


beginning: 5, language: 5, plot: 5, ending: 5, dialog: 5, characters: 5.
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Language: sentence length and flow Dialogue: How realistic
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Holllly freakin YAOI


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that good or bad? XDD
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Oh god, I wake up, read this about two hours after I finish my homework, and this made me wake up so muchies.
HILSHAR FARMS, GO YAOI!!
Wait... wrong thing. Oh wells
ItaDei!
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welcome XD
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