Brawl the Hidden Truth: Part 9- Death Before Dreams

As days passed by the wish of one is growing "Silents!" growled Himer then grabbed a soldier by the neck "If she doesn't wear the neckless then Excaliban will never rise once more!" then Himer lift the soldier and threw the soldier to the ground "If she wouldn't wear the neckless then force her to wear it!" as the soldier stood up
"But she refuses no matter how much time we asked her!" shouted the soldier the Himer grab the soldier
"As the next ruler she must!" the Himer let go the soldier and left1

"The Land of Despair, Excaliban... we're finally here!" said Roy as the Metriod leads the way "the land made of bodies..."
"the river are blood..." said Mich at Excalibur Castle
"The land that is haunt by souls..."
"A place where the sun will never shine..."
"Night haunt the moon for it will never show..."
"The Land of Despair" said Roy and Mich
Then everyone look over the hill and could Excalibur Castle in the distance the grass was green the river was clear white "I don't see the bodies or blood..." said Marth
the Metriod signed then said "A war took place here... in 'tis evergreen land of fate"
"As the Queen Efrea had passed on the heavens..." read Mich off the book
"Thee war of Excaliban and Rina had begun..."
"The war of Riot's Wish..."
"Rina took a chance to destroy Excaliban 'twas after the queens death..."
"A battle took place in the land of Excaliban..."
"thee bodies lies on the ground..."
"the blood run to the river..."
"and thee souls ran to leave their bodies behind..."
"with death's wish the kingdoms have fallen..."
"in till thee goddess of wish come back on the a baby is born..."
"the baby powers of wish grant will revive the kingdom..."
"to thee revive the war of Riot's Wish..."
"the kingdom that get hold of her will win the war..." said the Metriod and Mich "and have the power to grant any wish they want..."2

Then Ike slam his hand into the tree and shout "so everything for a stupid WAR!" everyone stood there in silent
"We should probable get moving..." said Diddy Kong then everyone started to walk to Excalibur Castle as they got to the city of Excaliban, Deltana, name after the King Himer, and Queen Efrea child that had die at age 2 from the Riot's Wish, holds the Excalibur Castle
"NOOOO~! Stop!! Free her I beg of you!" shout lady at a solder
"Out my way! To hid a baby that girl from the king!" shouted the solder then kicked the lady
"... I can't take this" then Link knock down the soldier on to his knee and the lady ran to her baby and ran back more soldiers came Roy, Marth, Pit, Ike, Meta Knight, and Mario couldn't stand the soldier went after Zelda, Peach, and Samus, Link went to protect Zelda as the same for Mario and Peach
"Link!" scream Zelda as a sword nearly hit Zelda but Link block it "Link!"
"Zelda, you Peach and Samus go to the castle" said Link as push of the soldier then a scream came from the castle
"Ahhhhhhhhhhh!" and blood leak from the castle and soaked the whole castle inside out the voice said "Blood would fall... All living thing must go one day..." then voice fade then Peach and Samus grab Zelda
"Link!" scream Zelda tears fell down Zelda as the same Peach as Peach must leave Mario
Link said "I love you, Zelda..." then Link ran off to fight off the soldiers
Zelda cried "Link!!!" then Kirby follow Samus, Peach, and Zelda and they got the gate way of Excalibur Castle...

Author notes

Bloody, huh? ^^? so yeah I got new character (yay! ^^) I'm a bit lost as well so here a summery
Mich wouldn't wear the neckless Himer get piss. Everyone reach to Excaliban at the same Roy and Mich said the same as well the same the Metriod and Mich. Everyone got to Deltana and while there was a fight between a woman and a soldier about a baby that was girl Link got angry because he a knight so yeah... Link and everyone got into a fight and Zelda, Peach, Samus, and Kirby is at the castle gate. there the summery...

Deltana (Del-tan-na)

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