Chatland: Chapter 1

Once a pond a time ago........1

-Flashes back to a week ago-2

Last Sunday, Cassi was sitting in her house bored as can be. She was surfing the new site that she had found on google, two days before her nineteenth birthday. It was a poetry site, and a very cool one at that. Her boyfriend has just left to go back to college for the next week, after spending time with is girlfriend on her birthday weekend.3

It was around one o'clock in the afternoon or three o'clock which ever it didn't matter. She was looking around at others poems and commenting them. Cassi the saw that she had a new comment on one of her pieces which was called "Shattered." It was someone named Pro, but it also said "In The Chat Room." So, Cassi went to follow this person named Pro to see if he meant the sites chat room. Because, the few times that Cassi had gone no one had been in there, before that day.4

(Though, now today a week later after meeting a lot of her new best friends. She can't remember who all was there that day, when she met Pro in Chatland.)5

Cassi had been in chatland for a couple days now. She had met a lot of new people, there was Pro....(DUH), Izzy, Rose, Ladyoftheword, Meagan, Jay, Loki, and Annie. They we're all talking in chatland one day. Pro said that he was hungry and he had went to go make ribs. So the rest of them in chatland goofied around, and talked to Cassi. When pro came back from making his ribs, thinking that he would share with his new best friend. Cassi tired to take one of the ribs, but before she could her fingers were snapped up into Pro's mouth. He had bitten her, and she ran off and wrote a poem about him, and called it "Pro ~ You Meanie~."6

Pro said that her finger looked like a french fry, but til this day he still bites her saying that it is fun. Cassi would beg to differ she fines *whipping* Pro a lot more fun than being bitten. That's why she, Izzy and Rose are called demons, because they torture Pro's poor tushy.

Author notes

So to understand this story, its kinda like Alice In Wonderland, just not really. Its about a chatroom on another site I'm on. It's really funny. Though the story only has 3 chapters at the moment. It's a quite funny story, just I don't know how funny it is, without knowing the inside jokes.

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  • Reaver Greeters member
    November 5

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    Sounds very interesting! Careful with your grammar, but other than that the premise is Sublime Can't wait to read more of this story!

    Make the chapters a bit longer, or make this a prologue. Just a suggestion!

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