Chaos Thery1
The Fallen2
Lightning flashes brightly, lighting up the sky. Revealing a forest of dead trees and animals. The animals’ carcasses are either singed or burnt severely. Some are no more than charred bones. Smoke rises from the skull of a dead deer and the sky darkens again as the bright lightning fades as quickly as it had come. Another flash of blue electricity, this one followed by the clap of thunder. 3
In the distance there are two people, one is lying face down and the other standing at the others head. The one on the ground is bleeding profusely out of a large jagged gash in his upper back. Blood pours from the wound like wine across a tile floor as it pools around his body. 4
The loss of his life blood makes his amethyst eyes cloud, as they stare into death. The right side of his face is settled in the crimson liquid, and his ebony hair his wet with blood. His hair seems to be longer and hangs just above his eyes where they seem to try to hide from the world.5
His body is lean, Natural muscle, and if standing he would be about six feet tall. His once strong arms and legs lie limp in the warm pool. Even in death this man is beautiful. He wears a black t-shirt that is soaked with the thick red liquid. His jeans are speckled with blood on the back side and soaked wear he lay.6
The one standing near him has a smirk on his face. His long golden curls hangs down to his shoulders, and is parted down the middle. You would expect blue eyes, but he has snow white gauze wrapped around his head and eyes. The white cloth almost blends with his hair. He wears a black long sleeved shirt, but he wears a brown leather coat with the sleeves ripped off. You cans see the stitching and cotton wear it had been ripped out some time ago. He also wears a pare of blood spattered jeans.7
He looks down at the mans body. The clouds choose to let go of there clear rain and it begins to pour down on the two men. The man laughs a sinister laugh then says to the body.8
“Do you remember Chaos? When we first met all those years ago? The club in Texas. Remember?” he gestures to the body, “Aww come on get up. I know you’re not dead. You one of the fallen.” he frowns at the motionless body.9
“Fine,” he says he then kicks the body.10
“oh your good,” Now lets rewind the clock of time back a few years.11
Rock music is playing loudly from a live band. Neon lights flash on and off in sequence with the strobe lights. People are dancing and drinking enjoying them selves. Chaos is sitting on a barstool next to a young lady. In front of chaos is shot glass filled whisky, and the young woman has a form of martini.12
Chaos is wearing a white t-shirt that is a one size to small and a black dress shirt that is unbuttoned. The lady is wearing a short dress with lots of jewelry. Chaos has a look of becoming annoyed and takes his shot then plays with his glass.13
“Come on! Just one dance!” she yells out at him. He sighs and looks over really looking at her with his amethyst eyes. She was different than the other people in the club. She had a different feel to her.14
“look lady, I’m not in the mood to dance. ok” he says.15
“O.K. Chaos calm down,” she replies16
“I am calm I- wait a sec I didn’t tell you my name! Who are you?!”17
She sighs and looks at him, her blue eyes began to change. The blue seemed to be washed over by emerald waves. Her eyes literally constantly change from sapphire to emerald. Chaos burst out18
“You’re a!”19
“Shush! You‘ll blow my cover,” she said silencing Chaos20
“you’re a fallen,”21
“actually I’m an angel” Chaos’s jaw drops22
“you can‘t be what are you doin‘ talking to me? I’m one of the fallen you‘re supposed to be … helping people?”23
She just stares at Chaos and gives a smirk. Chaos curses and a man about five four stands up and walks toward Chaos. He has short golden hair and normal blue eyes. Defiantly not an angel.24
“I don‘t think you should talk like that in front of a woman sir.” He say’s and looks Chaos in the eye.25
“so you ganna do sum thing about it shorty” Smarts off Chaos. The man swings. Chaos stands up quickly knocking his barstool over. The man swings with his left Chaos blocks with his right fore arm, causing the mans body to stop in shock, and strikes the man in his stomach the man’s body jerks back and he falls back but catches him self.26
“You’re fast” say’s the man,” another man from the table he was sitting yells27
“Get ‘em Jason!” Jason runs at Chaos with his fist ready. He swings putting his whole body into the strike. It goes strait toward Chaos’s face, but at the last possible moment Chaos tilts his head left and strikes with his right directly under Jason’s arm and grabs his face around his eyes and squeezes. Jason yells out in agony, and blood runs over chaos hand still holding his face. Jason grabs out in all directions finally grabbing Chaos’s wrist.28
“MY EYES!!!” he yells out in anguish trying to pull free. Chaos Drops him and looks down. Jason’s face is a bloody mess. The bone around his eyes have been broken and his eyes are not visible. Blindness is all Jason sees. The crowed around them watching the fight is completely silent. 29
Jason continues going on about his eyes screaming. Chaos grabs him up and whispers in his ear to were only he and Jason can hear.30
“Come back when you can kill me,” he drops him and Chaos looks to the crowed and says, “Call an Ambulance,” he turns to the angel and motions to the door as he wipes the newly spilled blood on his black jeans. He walks toward the door and takes on look back at Jason who has know gone unconscious and now surrounded by worried spectators. He then walks out the door.31
The angel runs to catch up with Chaos. She looks pale and seems to feel ill.32
“What the hell! Chaos was that necessary?!” she yells Chaos glares at her.33
“No but he had it coming, punk messing with the god of Chaos”34
“You‘re not a God! You‘re an angel! A fallen one!!” she yells and Chaos glares at her his amethyst eyes shining in the pale moon light, his ebony hair seems to blend into the darkness of the night and he is sweating despite the cool autumn wind. The woman is quiet, in awe of Chaos’s some what forbidding beauty. They walk a while in silence down the sidewalk father into the dark city limits.35
“What‘s your name?” says Chaos. His first words seems to echo in the dark woods. Chaos’s voice sounds deep and sweeter in the intimate abyss. She stutters unnerved by Chaos’s sudden change from dark and foreboding, to sweet and romantic.36
“O-omega” she finally says. Chaos stops, lowers his head, letting his hair covers his eyes. Omega turns to him.37
“What is it Chaos?” she says slightly confused. Chaos can not hold it back any longer. He looks up at Omega, and his amethyst eyes seem to catch fire. The beautiful purple stone in his eyes burn covered in fiery pain he cries out. The purple is barely visible under the fire. Chaos lets his true form out, only visible to those who can see aura(angels, demons, and certain gifted mortals). Chaos’s back bleeds and two perfect cuts on his shoulder blades, and out of these cuts bone fights it way through the flesh. Wings with no feathers burst from his back Chaos Screams. Omega covers her mouth with both hands unable to look away.38
The wings are the wings of an angel but lack feathers, but soon almost burning on to the wings, snow white feathers grow from the bone. Chaos drops to his knees hands supporting his weight as the feathers quickly assemble. 39
As the wings finish Chaos throws back his head his hair falling back reveling flames under the Purple stone, and screams out in pain as the snow white feathers turn black, as smoke rises from the wings leaving them as dark as the abyss. 40
Chaos is surrounded in a red aura, and gives off a presence of power and divinity. Chaos stands slowly finally looking at Omega. In his eyes a fire burns surrounded by deep purple stone and a tear falls. breathing heavily, he finally says 41
“I.. am… a… God.” Omega looks in to the eyes of Chaos and she sees why his fallen name is Chaos. In this form, in his eyes, you can see into his soul. The fire is a memory, of murder, and massacre. Some one, a woman, is cut down by a man in white with a red cross. She screams and Omega screams looking away from the memory .42
“What did you see?” asks Chaos. Omega answers, 43
“But its your memory? I don’t-”44
“He didn’t tell you did he?” ,Chaos lets out a small laugh, “They took my memories when I fell. I don’t even know my name when I died, so what did you see?” Chaos looks through Omega as she speaks,45
“I can’t say I’m not sure what I saw there was to much-”46
“Chaos.” ,he finishes for her. “I know. I‘ve made men go insane by looking into these orbs of pain” a tear drops to the ground and makes an unusually loud plop. Silence is all that’s heard and the beat of the dark wings on the cool night air. Omega breaks the silence,47
“I have to go,” she closes her eyes and a bright flash of light and Omega is gone. Chaos breaths out and the black angelic wings fall apart, first the feather and then and bones collapses onto the grass and burns away with no flames. Chaos collapses and lay still face down on the ground. His fight for control over the ungodly power inside was over until a few days pass. So for now he sleeps.48
Jason jumps forward only to be stopped by restraints on his wrist and legs. Jason has gauze wrapped around his eyes tied in the back. Blood has stained parts a deep crimson. He has an I.V. the bend of his arm. A drop of water drops into the device Jason sees. He thinks to him self. But I can’t see? How did I know water fell? another drop. Jason sees a blue ripple, like in a pond, the ripple is almost neon, and as it ripples images appear. 49
Like sonar the waves of sound washes over all the objects in the room. Jason moved his head seeing the sound making neon blue shapes appear from the darkness. The door opens and the blue ripples form in Jason’s vision. A women, a nurse, walks into the room making the blue ripples as she walks.50
“Oh Jason you‘re awake!” she exclaims seeing the man looking around. She hurly runs to him untying his restraints.51
“why was I tied down?” asked Jason as he rubbed his wrist. The nurse looks at his bandages and says,52
“In your sleep you seemed to suffer from nightmares. you would thrash and move, so we where forced to restrain you.” Jason stands feeling stronger every second awake.53
“I‘m leaving.” he says standing tall.54
“But you can’t You just-” Jason raises his hand and he sees a duller blue wave Wash over the young nurse’s body. A high droning sound is heard and the woman falls onto the bed unconscious. Jason looks down at his clothes. He was wearing only a hospital gown. A doctor walks in,55
“What the He-” Before he can finish the same Droning sound can be heard. The doctor falls. Jason quickly put on the doctors uniform. He taps the ground with his foot, his sound waves move across the room showing a glass window and he was apparently on the bottom floor. He thought really hard, thinking of high pitch sounds. Finally, the glass shatters into tiny sand like shards.56
He smiled thinking to him self . With this I can finally see the truth in the world. I could make this world good, peaceful, and tranquil. I bet I can kill him… he stepped out of the shattered glass and walked away.Chapter 257
Chaos’s eyes blink open slowly as he awakes. He sits up slowly resting his back against a tree’s trunk and looks around. The leaves of the trees have turned a dull brown. In Texas the leaves do not turn the lovely golds and reds of fall, just dull, brown, crunchy leaves that fall from the limbs of the mighty oaks. 58
Chaos lets out a long yawn with an arm stretch to match. Chaos slowly stands and begins to walk across the crunchy forest floor. He looks up and can seeing the sun rise turning the sky pink and purple. The wind blows and ruffles Chaos’s hair as he walks to the edge of the forest. 59
He leans against a tree on one shoulder and looks at the valley bellow. The hills slope downward from all sides leaving a center filled with water, a sort of private oasis. Who’s oasis you ask? 60
Chaos smiles looking toward his home. At the top of one hill is an old house that resembles a plantation house with white columns that support a wrap around porch. Chaos walks toward the oasis at a steady pace. When he reaches the crystal pool he sits down and removes his dress shoes. Then he throws his socks onto his shoes. 61
Chaos rips his white t-shirt down the middle revealing an uneven cross scar on the upper left of his chest. He shrugs off his two shirts reveling many more scars on his back. The scars criss cross along his spine and ripple as he stands. He also has one scar on his rib cage that seems weathered more than the others.62
Chaos breathes out and jumps forward into the water with a splash. Chaos lets him self sink into the debts of the crystal clear water. His hair seems weightless as his feet touch the bottom of the pond. Chaos opens his eyes and watches the fish swim by.63
He sinks and gets onto one knee. He looks up then he jumps as fast as a bullet out of a gun. He punches through the surface and continues upward then plummets to the ground landing on the other side other the pool. Chaos looks over his shoulder at the water, then continues toward the house.64
Chaos opens the solid oak door and looks into the room. The living room is decorated with artifacts from different ages throughout history. Gold amulets, Asian coins, and assorted tapestries hang from the walls. Despite the different objects in the room only one is out of place.65
A long sword is leaning against an old Egyptian throne. The long sword has a handle as dark as the void, and a blade of assorted reds and blacks. Chaos walks over and sit on the throne with his legs over the arm of it. He then picks up the sword in one hand and says,66
“Hello Abyss,” he twirls the sword, “I sorry you haven‘t had the chance to use you” Chaos stops hearing a strange noise. The sound of wind is heard followed by a loud zapping noise. A purple vortex opens in front of Chaos out of the vortex steps a man, and as he exits the vortex closes behind him. 67
The man wears a long black trench coat dragging the ground. His slender worn hands have leather gloves with no fingers and silver circles on each knuckle. His pants are worn leather kept up by a belt with a silver skull buckle. He also has a knife attached to his black combat boots.68
The man is facing away from Chaos, so he takes this as a chance to hide abyss. The man turns seeing Chaos. His eyes open wide then return to normal.69
“Hi,” says the man, “I’m looking for a man named Chaos. You seen ‘em?” the man’s voice and body are young but his eyes are old and wise. He runs a hand through his short unusual white hair. Chaos speaks,70
“Maybe, who’s asking?” Chaos stands and his eyes glow briefly. Abyss begins to float behind him out of sight. The man smiles and says,71
“Roku. I’m a bounty hunter, and he has seventy grand on his head just dead!” Roku begins to say something else but he sees the handle of abyss float slightly over Chaos’s left shoulder. He reaches into his trench coat with both hands and the same noise is heard, and two large silver revolvers are now in his hands.72
“Chaos!” he says pulling the hammers back as Chaos reaches over his shoulder griping abyss in his right. Both guns fire just as abyss is in front of Chaos the bullets hit just above the hilt. Chaos swings down with abyss, but Roku jumps back and the blade hit’s the marble floor with a spark. Roku lands, his coat flowing behind him like a cape, he comes up with the revolvers side by side. 73
“you‘re fast,” says Roku. Chaos appears behind Roku,74
“I know,” He swings abyss around his head then swings down at Roku’s head, but the sound of wind is heard and Roku is gone. A zapping sound and Roku jumps from a vortex opening on the ceiling. He kicks chaos in the back sending Chaos slamming into the hallway wall.75
Roku clenches his fist and the black gloves melt away from his hands. He shrugs off the trench coat, and a blue metal begins to twist and wrap around his arms forming a form of medieval Gauntlets. It continues on down till forming vicious claws, then black cracks cover the armor as it hardens. The same metal wraps around his face forming a blue metal mask.76
He punches down and Chaos rolls across the floor letting the gauntlet collide with the marble shattering the ground. Roku pulls wipes dust off his gauntlet. Chaos punches from behind, but Roku blocks with his gauntlet. Chaos yelps,77
“Oww!! God that hurt!” Chaos grips his hand, “Why would you do something like that!?” Roku looks confused and says,78
“uh? Sorry?” Chaos throws a roundhouse kick into Roku’s side with all his might. The kick hits and sends Roku through the wall into the kitchen.79
The kitchen is decorated with elaborate tapestries. The counters are covered in dust, apparently Chaos doesn’t use the kitchen much. Roku is half way into the island counter in the center. Chaos smiles thinking that its over. He turns, only to find Roku standing there.80
“Oww.” says Roku. Chaos swings at his head, but Roku ducks and weaves throwing a jab into the ribs of the fallen angel. Chaos Recoils backward, throwing another roundhouse. Roku catches it with ease. He throws him into the island.81
Chaos crashes through the old wood slamming into the cabinets. Chaos stands slowly, as Roku watches him with a sneer. Chaos yells out,82
“ABYSS!” The blade flies to his hand and then chaos charges. He slashes down as Roku dodges barely. Chaos slashes rapidly, cutting into Roku. Chaos steps back and smiles briefly till he sees the fresh wounds heal as quickly as they were made. He frowns, and puts hands up ready to fight. “What are you,” Roku shows no intention of fighting.83
“Oh, ho I wish I knew”84
This is my first 3 chapters of Chaos Thery be honest is it any good
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It's really good, Chaos. The spelling could be better, but that's okay. ^-^ I liked it. There's yer comment. Ya happy? =P
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this is really good! i love the way you started it! you pulled me in! great job!





