Part 1 of : No title yet sry

Once upon a time there lived a magical princess ……….ok, ok, it was actually a regular 13 year old girl named Hope and she was in love. The guy was like no one Hope ever thought she would like. He was good looking, smart and with what seemed like a great look on life. His shiny jet black hair and deep brown eyes were his finest assets. They talked non-stop and boy, how she was in love, like a magical bird that sang to her all night and all day. His name was quite a curious thing thou, when she spoke of him she game him a code name which was “steave”. His real name thou were like the bird Jay or also known as Jason, and alas is where our great story begins!!!!!1

Characters:2

Ally: a strange alien from outer space, just kidding3

Sydney: a girl with a broken foot4

Ray: a black mailing friend5

Jay: a guy (code name is “steave”)6

Hope: a love struck puppy7

Jonathan: a misunderstood jerk8

Sharmare: a stupid loser that hope hates9

ACT 1 Scene 110

(The lunchroom)11

Ally: Hi Hope, how was “Steave” today?12

Hope: He was wonderful!!!!!!!13

Hope: Ally, What should I do?14

Ally what are you talking about?15

Hope: STEVE!!!!!!!!! I have to do something about him!!!!!16

Ally: You could ask him out.17

Hope: No Way!!!!! Not in a million years ally, I could never do that, never!!!!!!18

Ally: Ok, ok relax now don’t be so dramatic…POPCORN19

Hope: Ally, you are no help what so ever.20

ACT 1 Scene 221

(Hope is walking home from school and Jason catches up)22

Jason: Hope, wait up.23

Hope: What’s up Jay?24

Jason: Not to much, I just thought you might like some company walking home and since I live this way I could walk with you.25

Hope: That would be nice. (In my head I am screaming OH My GOD, over and over again)26

Jason: Are you still going to see Harry Potter and the Goblet of Fire this weekend?27

Hope: Yup.28

Jason: My buddies and I are going too, maybe we could …ummmm join you?29

Hope: Like a date?30

Jason: Well, Yah, what do you say?31

Hope: I say I would love to.32

Jason: Really?33

Hope: Yah.34

Jason: Ok great, meet you there?35

Hope: Sounds like a plan.36

Jason: All right then bye37

Hope: Bye 38

Hope: (keeps walking turns the block and then lets out a scream of happiness)39

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{to be continued}41

Author notes

Ok this is going to get way werider in the next part so i felt i should tell u alittle bit about the next part to be fair When we go see the movie we are going to get sucked into it and that's all i am sayin!!!!!

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  • Sealight
    November 18, 2005
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    Hope, try to be a little more realistic!!!!!!!!! What TIME are you going to see the movie? AND I AM NOT AN ALIEN!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!(this is Ally) Write more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

  • Sealight
    November 18, 2005
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    Hope, this is Sydney. I;'m at Ally's house and I demand that you write more NOW!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • BlackBloodyRose
    November 12, 2005
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    :)

    WAITING!!

  • The Take Over
    November 12, 2005
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    Hope you must write more. You're killing me!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!


  • ashes of freak
    November 12, 2005
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    hey this is good...well talk to you L8er Emily hope you come up w/ a title soon...lol...

  • The Take Over
    November 12, 2005
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    Hope. You spelled my name wrong. It's Sydney. Not Syandy. My name dosn't even have an a in it. And my FOOT is broken. Not my toe. Other than those CRUCIAL mistakes, very good. I REALLY REALLY LIKE IT!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!!! YAAAAAAAAAY!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

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