two sentences {contest entry}

I stared into your eyes and realised the truth. You monster, how could you?

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  • Lady Pixie Greeters member
    November 15
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    Hey! I really liked these two sentences!
    Simple and short- but very effective and made me curious to know more
    Great work
    Thank you very much for your entry

    Pixie


  • Sonic Banana
    November 4

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    ummmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmmm.... Either this is vampire werewolf demon... thingy.. already don't like those. But on a side note you caught me in THE FIRST SENTENCE! which is amazing. I lost interest in the second sentence though very nice though

    • Rawrr.
      November 5
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      I just randomly made it up, it's not meant to be vampire or werewolf (I hate all those crap chliches). Yeah, I can see what you mean now about the second sentence.